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He took my hand and helped me out of the car. Taking a final deep breath I pulled myself out and began walking to the front door.
- COMMENTS
Strixalucoalmost 2 years agoThere's something odd, the next (and previous) chapter doesn't show up here as they should.
MattKesterover 6 years agoThe story is excellent, but the grammatical errors - mainly punctuation - are distracting. I would encourage some editing.
Having said that, the story flows well and logically. I fell in love with Elizabeth and identify with Gabriel. Without the distraction of the grammatical errors, I would give this five stars.
I want to encourage the author to write much more!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI love yours stories and the way you write, they're so lovely and wonderful :)
FairytaleBabyabout 7 years agoAuthorSo glad you like the story. Thanks for the support, chapter 3 is available to read now! And yes I do plan on finishing it to the end :)
Mil200about 7 years agoThis is such a good story! Please keep writing more! I don't find many ddlg stories and when I do half of them aren't good but I really like this one so I hope you finish it to the end!
