All Comments on 'My Secret Valentine'

by Pelaam

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macpedrosomacpedrosoover 10 years ago
Loved the puzzle

I thought the puzzle was a lovely romantic idea and I loved the way the doc defended Rik even before he worked anything out. Great story please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Loved it!!

I love every one of your stories! Thank you for all your writing. Your one of my favorites!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Wonderful tale for Valentine's or any day for that matter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
detail

All your stories are great, but in your stories it's always similer when comes too "the older man or younger man". Could you try putting some detail at there ages and how they look.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Hot Sticky & Sweet, A Perfect Chocolate Valentine

This story was gorgeously written. The descriptions were wonderful and I could really feel the emotion through it. Its been a while since Ive enjoyed knowing the characters as much as I've enjoyed reading the slash. Thanks for a great story!

MilkChocolateAmazonMilkChocolateAmazonover 16 years ago
Loved

I agree with the previous post. Your stories are always great. keep them coming. This one was especially sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
love is in the air

love your stories!! keep em coming

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