All Comments on 'My Sensuous Aunt Madge Ch. 01'

That is exactly what I first submitted to Literotica but admin rejected as it was fewer than 750 words. I had to do a complete rewrite but I am sure the first one would win A Pukelizer Prize. LOL

Please keep reading, it gets worse.

Thanks! You started my day with a wonderful laugh!

The chapter was good. Waiting for the next one

I actually lost my virginity to my Aunt and to this very day I cherish the times we spent together and the things I learned from her.

Without revealing too much of the plot, I am striving to weave this into a story of the actual romantic love between my aunt and me.

In all likelihood, I shall only be releasing one chapter per week as I want this to be more than just a "fuckfest."

Please follow along until it reaches the point of tedium for you. Hopefully, that will not happen.

Thanks again for your very kind comment.

Just finished reading all the Sylvia's Mom chapters. While this is starting out in a similar vein, it feels very different. I'm hooked.

Also, you must have an editor now, or someone to proof read your stories before you post them. That's a welcome improvement.

Actually, I do not yet have an editor or even a proofreader. I have just slowed my pace and stopped rushing to get 'something' published. I pay attention to ALL comments my readers make as I understand how difficult it is to read a story that is filled with spelling, grammar, and other obvious errors.

I am also slowing down the constant sex as I believe I can develop a story in which the sex adds to the plot rather than merely makes the story appear to be more interesting. I write for you and all my readers with the hope I can make your reading experience pleasurable and not a chore just to get through it.

There are many, many excellent authors who submit their work for publication here and all of you, as readers, deserve to receive the very best of our work. Any reader may follow whomever they choose as their favorite author/authors. As an author, I also have a choice and I choose to gather a few discerning readers and I shall strive, constantly, to earn a following of readers who understand I am writing for them.

I trust I do not offend anyone by either my work or by my responses to comments and feedback.

Thank you for both your kindness and your patience as I learn to become more proficient at the craft of writing.

P.S. I plan have another chapter of this story submitted for review within the next day or so and then I will write another chapter of Sylvia's Mom. Writing two works simultaneously is, indeed, a daunting task.

Excelsior!

Starts out slowly, letting momentum build.Eagerly awaiting further installments.Surely they will make love very soon

Waiting for next chapter. Thanks

This has the makings of an outstanding series. I think mom and dad are setting him up big time. Hurry with next chapter.

I learned a lot from my first series which I must still complete but I am so deeply involved with this one that I feel compelled to continue it to completion first. It is my hope to have chapter 2 written, proofread, edited, proofread again, reedited, proofread again and hopefully submitted for review by tomorrow ( Friday 6/16/17).

If all goes well, it could be published by midweek.

Thank you for your support.

Let's take the next step, then after a few weeks Mom and Dad can make a surprise visit and stay for a long weekend of family fun. Anxious to read more.

Do you really want the plot to be that obvious and transparent?

I am a neophyte author and this is my first venture into writing in this genre where readers can be brutally honest in their critiques, which is a very good thing for aspiring authors. Give the readers what they want but...To thine own self be true...

Let's wait and see what develops in Chapter 2 which, hopefully, will be published here in the next several days. After all, Michael and Madge have not yet even had sex.

Please do me a favor and tell me you'll be patient and follow this story as it unfolds as if it was the passion of a woman being slowly aroused and seduced to the point that her body screams and begs to be magically lifted into the realm of ecstatic orgasmic bliss and consumed in the rapture of its sublime release.

You'll do that for me, won't you?

I shall strive to my utmost to make this a memorable read.

Thank you

I do not think I could wait.

Looking forward to another chapter...soon

Thanks for reading and for your comment. Chapter 3 is already in the pending queue. With a bit of luck, it may survive the review gauntlet and be published early next week. Please check back, the next chapter may contain a somewhat unexpected twist.

Writing for the Literotica reading audience is far more challenging than I expected it to be, but this ole Dawg ain't scared of Gators. ;-)

Thanks for your support.

I was 15 since I started to have a crush on my mother's sister Helen who was 38 years old,Helen was still a gorgeous woman with firm asses and nice boobs and long legs. My crush started when I peeped at her taking her shower. To be fair enough,I must admit that though I am now 30 yrs old and fucked several women,my aunt had the best body! She was childless and divorced when she was 40 and me 17 with a 7 iniches long cock. One night when I stayed at her place for the weekend,the weather started to deteriorate. There was heavy rain and thunder and around 11.30 pm she knocked at my door, asking me if she could sleep in the same bed as me because she was terrified with thunder.I told her that it was OK. She had put the light on.So Helen jumped on the bed and went under the sleeping covers. She had only a white satin string on her and was braless under the thin tissue upwards and as she had let the light on I noted that her tits were hard,dark and long.then etre was a sudden burst of thunder . And I was a bit shocked when she hugged me under the sleeping covers and met with my already big hard on.I also hugged her and it was not a surprise when we sweetly kisses each other, I also kisses her neck,her face, the lob of her ears.she stated to moan. I immediately knelt on my knees under the cover and pulled down her string and I noted a wet spot where here pussy was.I stated to suck her feet then her inside legs and as the light was still on,I saw the most beautiful shaved pussy, opened like an oyster with all its moisture and when I sucked her salted pussy, I drank all the cum inside and the mixture of piss made me mad ,she started to cry and when I tackled her clitoris, she howled like an animal and she told me "plse plse baby, I need your big cock inside my pussy. I told her that before we must suck each other in a 69 position .she sucked and ate my cock while I was eating her ass hole then her pussy. She cummed t times and during one orgasm,she peed a little and I drank her pee. Then I fucked her in all sort of positions, she cried, wept with pleasure then telling me dirty words which xcited her more and more.we put love bites on each other stomach, not in the neck because people would have known of our incestuous relationship. We fucked till 3 in the morning and fortunately as the weather was still very bad,she could cry the loudest possible,.Helen told me that she was a loud fucker but when she was with her husband, who did not like her crying,she had to eat the pillows, ,she also admitted that i was the first man to suck her assjole and that it was divinr.Since 5 years,my aunt and me have been continuously fucking.either at her place, in hotels, in our cars.my relatives are asking themselves why at my age,I had not a girl friend..if they knew! !My aunt Helen likes to spoil me with gifts over and above the fantastic fucking sessions she gives me.

Word processor count is 562 words. With a little bit of rewriting it will be long enough for publication here on lit. I strongly encourage you to do it. You've got talent.

How about telling us about the people. What are the fishing tips? Why is her invitation on a field that's not level? What was their demeanor during the month since he moved in? Why doesn't he call his dad? Why did we learn about his motorbike? How experienced is he?

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Well played!!!!!!

I don't check this site very often these days. Thank you for your kind words. So many readers expect literary excellence and we "amateur" writers just wait to see how badly, the "professional" critics beat us up. After all, these are just fun stories. If someone 'gets off" cool. If not, there are thousands more from which to choose. (Wink)

Excellent start!

Thanks for sharing such a great beginning.