by Templar_Writer
Not bad. Very rushed. The "fun" stuff felt forced, as if you couldn't wait to get it over with.
Dude acid is lower than 7 pH. Couldn't keep reading after that
"Dude acid is lower than 7 pH. Couldn't keep reading after that."
Gee, it must be difficult when one's ability to do something simple like reading is lost when you find an error. How do you survive in our imperfect world?
Nothing particularly innovative in the story, but an enjoyable read nevertheless. Thanks.