All Comments on 'My Sex-Packed Holiday Ch. 01'

by Naughty_Annie

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yumekoyumekoover 6 years ago

Oh my, that was delicious! <3

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
AWESOME start. Loved having Abi fuck Annk

Both twins are sexually active.

Love to see Aniid fuck her brother.

Maybe a foursome

Can't wait for the next chapter,.

More AWESOME fucking

horny2doithorny2doitover 6 years ago

Yes, so hot, sister watches her brother and her brother's lady friend are watched too my the girls Mom; while sister and Mom finger themselves and each other. So damn, Hot !!! Yes, it's hot to watch someone else get off as you are masturbating too. I hope sis comes on to her brother and they have slow - hard sex too ! I cannot wait for more chapters etc. Thanks.

pooky12349pooky12349over 6 years ago
vacation

Very nice story, so you're telling me that I have to wait for the second chapter? I don't think that's fair, stories this good should pop right out there!

Seriously. I liked this story, it was a lot of fun and the mother at the end was a lovely twist. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Thanks

Ted

HankWTullamoreHankWTullamoreover 6 years ago
Great start

Good storyline, great scenario so far.

spangle62spangle62over 6 years ago
Many memories

... though of teenage family holidays in North Devon, where you look at the posh hotel and wish you were staying there, and sadly not memories of the kind of awakening experience you described so thrillingly. Stories always have extra frisson if you can place them into your own world.

Still, no good having the local knowledge if the story is rubbish. Thankfully, though short, this is one of the most erotic I've read for a while. Hopefully Annie, we'll hear more about your family, Abi, Sally, and other characters very soon. Thanks for sharing x

daddy1950daddy1950over 6 years ago
Mmm!

Great sexual mix, Annie.

CassieKCassieKover 6 years ago
So fucking hot.šŸ”„šŸ”„

What a great story, sooo hot it had me wetting myself.

I now have to read the rest of this series.

Sorry I can't give you more than 5 stars, you deserve loads more.

šŸ’‹šŸ’‹šŸ’‹šŸ’‹šŸ’‹ I'll have to give you some kisses instead.

PaulwilliamPaulwilliamover 6 years ago
Wow

What a great story

I am sure that I will read it many times and also get hard many times and therefore cum off many times

Thank you

DustyDevilDustyDevilover 6 years ago
OFF TO A GOOD START

So far with chapter 1 an excellent start let's hope the rest of the series keeps up.

writerjabwriterjabover 6 years ago
I want to cum!

I love this story! I could "see" the action all the way, and loved how the two women followed along with the hot sex they were watching. So many options to consider for next chapters!

chimpeechimpeeover 6 years ago
MORE MORE

What a great chapter opener more please 5 stars for you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hot

Love your writing and your imagination. Will read more.

RanDog025RanDog025about 6 years ago
FUCKING HOT

THANK YOU FOR A VERY HOT STORY, I'D LOVE FOR YOU TO TELL ME THIS STORY ONE DAY! lol YOU'RE NOW ONE OF MY FAVORITES. GOTTA GO BACK NOW AND READ THE REST. ACTUALLY I USE TEXTALOUT WITH JENNIFER'S VOICE AND IT MAKES IT VERY SPECIAL!

jrdexterjrdexteralmost 6 years ago
Holiday fun

Mmmmmm, Thank You for a very arousing story. I will be reading more of your writing. It will be better for me if I can do it in shorts and t shirt instead of work attire. Thank You for this hard on.

roveroneroveroneover 2 years ago

VERY hot...getting diddled by hot-bodied milf type while watching her brother do her daughter, and promise of more to come...

5 and fave...glad there's more to follow-!

Capricon713Capricon7134 months ago

Great hot story well written

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