All Comments on 'My Sexy Mother Sabeen'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
blunders

hay is this ur real experiance.... or just copied.... r u male or female... male can be refered as he,his,him... female she,her

cannt belive this....

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
BAD BAD BAD BAD

All i need to tell u is that u shouldn't try to write anymore. If u want 2 write anyways u shouldn't try it in English. I hope u can undestand this comment

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wtf?

How the fuck does this shit make it onto the site?

bonnietaylorbonnietaylorover 13 years ago
they let asses w/o names send thier comments so why not! Fuck off dick head

get a life and leave the writters alpne or you'll have nothing to jerk your little dick too

rajeshkumaarrajeshkumaarover 11 years ago
Worst story.

One of the worst story I have read in literotica. Three of my stories were rejected, without any reason, but such a stupid story with grammatical mistakes and no continuation, is published.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Please stop writing

You don't have any creativity. So stop writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Pick a language and spell-check!

Aside from how tactlessly quick you jump to the mother-fucking, you sloppily zig-zag from English to what I'm guessing is Hindi and back for no reason and no translation at the pace that it reads like either you were typing with one hand and jacking off with the other OR you rushed to write the story BEFORE needing to rub one out. I know it's been... 15, almost 20 years, (shit!) since you posted here, but it still needs to be said how much of a mess this story is.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
What a dimension

Your dick dimension are awesome. It's almost square 6 inches length and 5 inches breadth. Check out the thing dangling between your legs is dick or floppy.

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