by anilsahotra
hay is this ur real experiance.... or just copied.... r u male or female... male can be refered as he,his,him... female she,her
cannt belive this....
All i need to tell u is that u shouldn't try to write anymore. If u want 2 write anyways u shouldn't try it in English. I hope u can undestand this comment
get a life and leave the writters alpne or you'll have nothing to jerk your little dick too
One of the worst story I have read in literotica. Three of my stories were rejected, without any reason, but such a stupid story with grammatical mistakes and no continuation, is published.
Aside from how tactlessly quick you jump to the mother-fucking, you sloppily zig-zag from English to what I'm guessing is Hindi and back for no reason and no translation at the pace that it reads like either you were typing with one hand and jacking off with the other OR you rushed to write the story BEFORE needing to rub one out. I know it's been... 15, almost 20 years, (shit!) since you posted here, but it still needs to be said how much of a mess this story is.
Your dick dimension are awesome. It's almost square 6 inches length and 5 inches breadth. Check out the thing dangling between your legs is dick or floppy.