All Comments on 'My Sexy Sister Amanda Ch. 02'

Excellent, please continue this love affair

"fanaticizing" for example???

Would that be 'fantasizing'?

You desperately need to get someone with a better grasp of English, including grammar, punctuation and spelling, to Proof read, and Edit, your stories.

Dont listen to others about spelling....they just need to be a jerk...

Its about the story. Very good story ! Please continue this one.....

The style...the erotic sexiness...good story...I hope there is more to come/cum!!!!

Loved this story. Please continue with this soon to be epic love story. 5 big stars

Hi Nine,

what a wonderful story, apart from being true to similar experinces I had in my youth it reminded me of the emotions that a brother and sister go through in their exploration of each other. I even recall the "footjobs" at the dinner table. just wonderful and real.

This has been a good story but it would have been a whole lot better if the author had not attempted to talk it to death.

Sometimes the lead changes and then doesn't! The rawness of the interaction was so real! Well written!