All Comments on 'My Sexy Wife Jennifer Ch. 01'

PLEASE BRING ON THE NEXT CHAPTER

that skank whore as put in a earlier comment, was hot, and made me cum with very little effort. very very well done. yummy.

Ok, J. I found the hidden e-mail address but I just get a bounce back message. Good story too, BTW.

definitely need another chapter ... 5 stars .

Excellent writing and an amazing story. The build up is perfect and the pay off is so hot! This definitely turned me on! Thank you!

Really hoping for ch. 2.

But I have to say I was waiting for her to be enticed into doing things for Pablo partly because of the growing erection she gave him.

But now that we know she can be coerced into being naughty we want to see where it leads when she gets back home!

I'd love to experience a hot horny scene like that. Loved it. Continue this story. PLEASE.

I would love to give my step daughter Jenny to Pablo and just watch to see how she would handle him. He sounds like he is a bit too big for her , but I hope she would try her best for me.

After reading a lot of crap, high rated crap, this story was delightful. Not only sexy but relatable and real. Whoever played in setups like this will agree, this is how proper threesome come about and are enjoyed well.

I don't know about well written, there are quite a few typos which is off putting and past tense is far better for story telling.

Not sure about plausible especially all this feeling compelled. After a few hours chatting and nothing said about her having a submissive nature it just wouldn't happen like that. Now... doing it because it's naughty and she gets a thrill from complying, that's plausible. I would have been happier if her focus had remained on not doing it because John wasn't there, that would have worked with the opening.

Still good fun though and 4*

Contrived, forced, superficial. Everything that happens is directed towards Jen's whorish character and sexual gratification. No drama, no controversy, no exploration of contextual moral, emotional, psychological, sociological questions and conflicts. Just another juvenile fantasy suck-&-fuck; equivalent of empty calories. Simply vacuous. Bleah.

My favorite part was the pussy play in the dressing room, would have loved to have her reach a powerful orgasm right the point of being discovered by other shoppers or the store clerk...

Why do all of your stories have this inane Q and A format? They're all stupidly written.

"I love you so much." Right, that's what they all say with their lips. Then they disappear one day following the illusion their mind creates around the big cock. Sorry, nice knowing you, good luck with your life.

Great story, sexy and exciting, I love it...

A well written story. It had a good flow to it. I didn't particularly care for Pablo though.

The story was a great tease with a fine conclusion. I was hoping, maybe, Jen would confess all she had done with Pablo, possibly while Pablo was beginning to fuck her.