All Comments on 'My Shameful Secret Revealed'

Your story really turned me on. I'd love to read your take on a mother/son story if you have any.

this story was great and i am hopping for my to cum

Good story. I cannot wait to hear more stories like this from you.

I rated this average, but with strong possibilities. I think it was okay for the father to apologise, but not cry in embarrassment, for his attraction to his daughter. A happier state of mind may have led to a more sensuous encounter. I rated it 3/5.

I would like to ask next time could you streach it out a little. Seemed like you were so hurried to make it happen it was over before the build up of the story began. The cry baby dad is too much! Then in two lines he is stripping her naked.

A good story, well told, but with one flaw. Can you seriously expect the reader to swallow the fact that a man who has been obsessed with incest since childhood has never had a thought about his own daughter? That seems to be the author preaching to the reader saying, "Don't think badly of me, I'm not a pervert really!"

Get real. If you are so ashamed of your fantasies, don't bother sharing them.

Keep it up do a chapter 2

I really liked the back story description on this one. I think it was an interesting twist with the two of them actually, hehe. I can understand him saying that he was just reading it to enjoy the stories and it had more validity with the back story since he'd been reading the stuff since he was a teen. I read incest dad/daughter, brother/sister and I dont have a daughter or a sister. (One can fantasize, eh?;). ....not that I *believe* him mind you, you know that fucker had thought about banging his cute daughter at some point! Hehe. Ahem. Anyway. I give this one a five, even though it needs a good bit of editing. ...also some odd phrasing, ending of two different sentences with 'kiss' like this:

"I was getting close so I pulled out and kissed." ...it just hangs there. Its sort of implied but you're left thinking 'kissed her? Kissed her ass? Her nipples? Was it a typo?' Etc.

...anyway really enjoyed it! Off to chapter two, no doubt where he might be banging her best friend! Hehe.