by IPullRabbits
I really anjoy this series, but it would be great if you would add more cuddling in the next chapter. Otherswise please keep on writing :)
Please continue this story. It has so many avenues you could take. I love the way they are coming together, and still keep up the normal brother and sister. Keep up the good work!!!
I really enjoyed your story, keep it true to your fantasy or the truth. I'll keep checking back for the next part.
I really like this story so I hope you're able to update more frequently now. One thing I'd really like to see added to this story is more romance. They should set the boundaries on the relationship, are they exclusive, how far will it go, etc. Just so you know I'm hoping for a more serious romantic relationship in this story.
Have you ever fucked her in her ass .Pant us another picture what you look like again how big her ass & tits are ,how big ur cock is , oh the next time u eat her pussy try finger fuckin her ass .. most women really lick that.
Why only one good fuck a night. Agree,,a good ass fuck, some reverse cowgirl to spice it up
This is an awesome story as I can relate to it. I have recently come a little closer to my step sister haven't seen her for years and now have a secret relationship. I would definitely like it if you can add some anal play.
It was great want to read more about these two with maybe bnit more deep oral and anal. Please no others involved. Want to see them get together.
Great story. Very believable. Very erotic. No anal. Just more fucking.
I really don't like It when they involve another family member... You could let she come more than once before he comes too. Maybe one of them going to the other's bedroom during the night while everyone sleep... A squirting would be cool too... Well, Just some ideas.
Great story reminds me of my step sister and I growing up. Too bad there haven't been any more chapters would have been great to see more of their relationship
I loved this series; to be honest I feel like it’d be even hotter if he ended up impregnating her just my opinion. But this is one hell of a series either way keep up the good work
I really enjoyed your writing and the story. As for suggestions I would look at continuing the story and how they keep their relationship a secret.
I would like to see how their relationship grows as their is generally a progression of romantic feelings when sex is involved, which in my reading of the story it seems that there is quite the potential for that to be explored.
It's really a crying shame that you didn't write chapter 4. I was enjoying it.
AWESOME adventure!
Loved the way she moved him around .
Wish we had more chapters or more sisters!
Loving this sexy story and the interaction between them is so realistic. More please. I wonder if they can end up living together and make a baby.