All Comments on 'My Sister and I'

I hate when writers do not finish but just stop.t2

Ive read more erotic things in the bible than story !!

Its absolutely shite ...

Sorry but 1* only

Whatever else you do in life, NEVER post another story here. This was akin to reading a Little Golden Book. What a complete and utter waste of space.

Keep up the writing. I enjoyed it completely!!!!

Too many unbelievable things.

Parents being lesbians should have been told when the parents were talked about, not paragraphs later. Like it was an afterthought. Forcing teens to sleep naked in the same bed? Under-age accidents would have happened. Then, too, hormones. Even in a shared king-size bed. Being naked all the time, the kids would be socially stunted and shunned.

The adult sister going naked outside to get the mail? No way. Unless it's a gated community, but we aren't told that. Indecency laws and possible charges of exposure to minors, depending on the parents of any neighbor children - the latter which are serious.

Even if there was no blood relationship, they were legally siblings, and unless they move, their marriage would be locally scandalous. Most places won't prosecute consenting adult siblings. But in a church? No way. Shunned and expelled from the synod. A pastor who runs around nude? Church-goers tend to be conservative. This might pass as a fevered dream or some sort of experimental commune, but again we aren't told that. So, no, too many unbelievable things we are asked to accept at face value as being allowed or as normal. Nice try.