All Comments on 'My Sister and Me Ch. 02'

Look at the title. It says Chapter 2. The background was in the first chapter. Read it.

Decent little number, the action is moving forward nicely. You have a very compact way of telling a tale.

A suggestion I might make, based on my own personal preference, is that the author "grab" the first chapter and this one and post them with Chapter 3.

As someone who submits to this site, I understand the reason for multiple chapters; however, as a reader, I find it annoying to have to go back and read the previous chapters before I can enjoy the current submission.

More dialogue between him and his sister is needed. He needs to tell her just how much he loves her as a woman and that he wants to spend the rest of his life with her.

As far as the ex-husband at the door, let him just stand there and if he tries to break in, then beat him to a pulp and have him arrested for breaking and entering.

They need to move away from her ex-husband to another city and live as man and wife.

He needs to open a business of teaching martial arts, so he can train the children that they have together in the art of self-defence.

Thanks

This is a very nice follow up to chapter 1. I'm looking forward to chapter 3. You have the possibility of a great series. Keep up the good work.

Threesome!!!

Break the other hand and tell him to get lost!

I think getting him to blow you may humiliate him sufficiently to realise the folly of his whoring your sisters videos on the net. Your sister will probably cum right off watching.

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Have him lick her pussy juice off your dick then suck you till you get hard again. Let him get on top of her, then you fuck him in his ass. Tell him that is the only way he will fuck your HOT sister ever again.

This is a great story. Hope it has many more tittillating chapters.

As I commented on the first part , my sister June and I have been lovers since she was 22 and I was 20... she helped me and encouraged me with my sexuality.. yebrows have been raised amongst family , but no one else knows about our relationship

Chapter 1 was hot. Chapter 2 is hot and beautiful. Definitely believable. And damn it! The clumsy oaf that I am, I meant to rate this a 5 and hit the 1 by mistake. Does anyone know if this can be corrected? -bern1965