All Comments on 'My Sister Anna Ch. 01'

While screwing his sister he "started to pick up the paste"?

He "caught a glimpse of her hair free mound in the dark"?

And then it was moonlight!

Feels like you rushed this to get it online. You started off trying to build a back story but then rushed right into the sex. The back story was a little on the unbelievable side. 18 and 19, still living at home, and sharing a room? Why not make them a little younger (high school aged). And the 2 different sized beds that they fought over? I get that you were trying to set it up as her getting into her own bed not expecting him to be in it, but since she didnt't seemed shocked or surprised, then why bother? I agree with the other post abou dark room and moonlight. I've seen this in other stories. You can't make it dark enough where one person can't see that someone is in the bed, but light enough (from moonlight) to be able to see bodily details.

1- loved that she had strong feelings for her brother

2 - Out of in go the blue BOTH ARE SEXUALLY ACTIVE. Is this daily weekly, then you said it had been a while. How strong are her feelings.

3 - can't wait for the next EPISODE mo

If she really loved him, she would've definitely not slept with other guys...

Especially when she sees him every single day, it's impossible to go for some other guy...

If she could just go for another guy like that, there was never any real love. So it's not really romantic..

OK,story had some faults,but these folks aren't professional/paid authors....give it a fucking break!

This is a pretty good story, I just think anyone who leaves rude comments is jealous or probably don't need to be on these sites looking at incest stories if they don't like or agree with incest sex. I have some TRUE, hot incest stories too

"I started to pick up the paste..."

Tomato paste?

great stuff

Good story. More would be great.

Ignore the grammar police, it is far easier to criticize than it is to contribute.

If they were true contributors, they would help you instead of being negative.

I loved the story.I hope you are still around to write the next chapter