All Comments on 'My Sister Eva Started It All'

loved the parts with Amber and Evie best, I would love to be Evie and have him for a brother

Definitely a keeper 🙌 🔥 🥞 ♨️ 5 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟

I liked this story because of the holloween costume and the fitment "trouble". Then comes mom and she sounds like MILF also. Then the offer of any time or place. The proposal was good as he can still fu## sis and mom.

Oh my oh my what a fantastic story indeed. A bit heavy on his cock size and stamina, but this story isn't supposed to be about only that. The real plot was to overcome the LITTLE BROTHER title. Thank you for a great story.

'Wildbill

eh...

Not enough was made of his getting back at his nasty sister. Mixed in with all the sex, she should somehow have been made to suffer drawn-out public humiliation, followed by abject apologies to her innocent, put-upon brother..

I always felt when a woman told a man...."I want your seed"....she was implying for him to make her pregnant? Am I wrong here folks reading this? For, isn't that is what a seed does? When I told my sister that I wanted to plant my seed in her womb she knew that I was referring to fill her with my baby batter. I wanted to give her my baby.

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Great story .

How about another chapter?

The mom telling him to "make love" felt out of place and took me out of the story a bit. I can suspend disbelief for fantasy's sake that after seeing her son's gifted member she would need to feel him inside her but it would be a purely lustful moment. There was nothing leading up to the event that would show sudden romantic love on her part.

I am jealous lol had a few situations similar to this but never quite as great.

Brilliant hot fun story. Such a turn.

Just read this again, omg so sucking fucking wonderful. My two live in fuck buddy’s and their best friend once again nearly fucked ourselves to death acting out this story. Mother, sister and sisters best friend, three absolutely sex crazed cunts gagging for cock, cunt and cum, what way to go. Fabulous fucking fabulous. Cunt crazed fucker.

Awesome story!!!

Decent but to over the top

Please don't write another part this 1 was more than enough it could have been a lot better but it was to forceful from 1 to the other didn't have a sense of family unity

There has to more parts to this story!!

I would love to do that exact same thing

Fantastic

DON'T STOP NOW...MORE MORE!!!!!!!!

I give it a 5/5 right up until the mom thing. I know there's gonna have haters or people will think I'm one but I could get behind the story up until then.

Amazing, I loved the entire story. You should write a part 2. :)

This has to be the best story I have ever read on this site or others and I have been reading them for 30 years. Would definitely love more

What a GREAT Story! It has just joined my (short) list of Best Literotica Stories All-Time!

The set-up for the story was perfect, and I really enjoyed Dale's ability to get into his sister's best friend Amanda's panties and fuck her until she fainted. It was perfect. And then to be able to roll into his mean sister's mouth, ass and pussy, depositing loads of cum in each hole as he went along -- that was a terrific comeback for her years of disparagement to him. Wonderful, the deception of who he was and potency of what he was doing to the two college girls was just monumental. And on top of that you were able to GET HIS SISTER PORKED AGAIN THE NEXT MORNING, ALONG WITH HER FRIEND aMANDA, FOR GOOD MEASURE. And the final achievement of this great story was a great segue into porking his mother with the best fucking of her life. What more could there ever be? Thanx for the Great Read!

then inside of my jeans are soaked in cum, i loved it!!!

You had 5 stars right up to the moment that you brought mom into it. 2 stars. Great start, horrible ending.

Absolutely loved this. A fine read. I wish it had a couple more pages. Is there a Part 2? Thanks for sharing. 5 stars.

would love to read a second chapter marriage

to amber eve moves in with them mother divorces dad

all 3 women get pregnate with dales babies

Hot!!!!!!!!!

What a great story, this is the second time I have read this tale and it is just or more entertaining as the first time. This story would make a great series, marrying Amber and then servicing both his sister Eva and his mom Robin. Well done again a solid 5+++ stars

Damn!!! PLEASE add a sequel to this! It desperately needs it. (OK. I admit it. I need it). I love your stories.

Would love to see a sequel to this one.

An excellent, erotic story, well thought through, prepared and written with some serious bedroom action. I plan on finding more of your work in the near future.

In fairness it is not just your story, but it seems every story has the women cumming like it is breathing! Once I’d like to read a story where the guy has to about kill himself trying to get his partner to orgasm. I know there are many females like that, or I am the most unlucky guy of all time. One gal was a frequent cummer, she would get off multiple times, but she was rare.

Wonderful, so decadent and depraved hedonistic and isestuous, omg what would I not give to suck and fuck these three fuck crazed cunts into next week and more. My two live in fuck buddies and their best friend and nearly fucked ourselves to death play acting out this story. More and more like this please and soon. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

What an ill-informed and ignorant, nauseating arrogant little dipstick your protagonist is portrayed as, about as credible as chocolate fireguard! His self description of how his very average, mundane and ordinary everyday dick frightens away potential sex-partners by-the-dozen and sends them scurrying away, mortified, would be laughable were it not quite so absurd!

I almost choked on my corn-cob! I DID abort the story halfway through the third paragraph! We don't expect Twain, Shakespeare or Gresham, but p-l-e-a-s-e, make your characters at least semi PLAUSIBLE!

Third read, great story, but I do feel sorry for Dad though. How low can a son go!!

For cuckolding his own innocent father, the son needs his teeth kicked in and his mother needs to be named and shamed, and divorced..

Well done Dale, just wrecked your own family with your greed.

This story is truly one of my top 3 stories on here great job

Too often, there’s a really hot, sexy story with more than sufficient room to grow and explore the subject matter, and then, like the painter who doesn’t know when the masterpiece is finished, but continues making more brush strokes, thus diminishing the “completed” work, many authors here seem to resort to bringing parents into the mix, and it just ruins it. I search for fiction involving siblings, and only siblings, so maybe that’s a shortcoming of the search engine, but parents are the “jump the shark” moment, for me. I enjoy the fantasy of sibling attraction, and additionally bringing the “best friend” into the plot is definitely a way to stir things up, but going into “parental territory” is really “a bridge too far” (figuratively AND literally).

There’s enough material here, with Eva, Amber, and Dale, for several more stories without crossing the line into Oedipus complexes. Where do they go from here? What happens after Dale graduates? Do the three of them get their own place? Do Dale and Amber ever actually get married? Are Eva and Amber able to avoid jealousy issues? The possibilities are intriguing. I applaud the author who explores them without resorting to cliched (and creepy) plot twists.

Lots of action and lots of sex.

Sometimes the hotness of the story can compensate foe the inherent grossness of the subject matter. This isn’t the case in this story.

Now that was hot and very erticoa. I hope it’s not the end. Next chapter is about mother and daughter and friend 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈❤️😜😜

great read part 2 soon i hope loved it

He was around in may of this year, writing stories

This story is over 9 years old. You complain like it's brand new. If dezurtdawg is even still around, do you think he gives a rats ass about your comments?

Lovely and enjoyable story! didnt have any issues w/ the story but kept thinkin every situation was the best case scenario. nothing wrog w/ that at all just a observation. enjoyed this one n now off to read some more of your work.

After all the shit she put on him, spiderman fucked them into oblivion, their begging for more. Very descriptive, loved it when he satisfied mom with Amber n Ev listening at the door. I get hard everytime i read this story. More please.

Very good although like the others adding in mom was to much at least at this point although I'd love to see a sequel to this story and I'd love this story if you re wrote it and took most of the mom stuff out and say worked her up to doing the same to her son in a sequel but it be just as good without her at all... and next time add alittle variety have one of the girls unshaven or something I know alot of people are into that but it's nice to find a traditional girl in some stories that doesn't shave at all it's my favorite way to look at a woman because she isn't afraid of showing everything her body has to offer and body hair is part of a potentially sexy body

My excitement about reading your story rapidly shrunk to the size of your dick.

Some people clearly have issues suspending disbelief when reading a fictional story.

I bet they complain that wizards and orcs aren't real when they WATCH Lord of the Rings, since they obviously don't enjoy reading.

This was a great story. It was a little on the cheesy side, but the sex was well described. I always love a thrust by thrust play by play. I'm not a fan of mother/son incest, so I lost interest towards the end, but that's just a personal preference. Though I will say, her yelling at her daughter about using her son's room because she didn't recognize him with Amber sitting on his face made me laugh.

fantastic

hot as hell until it got to the mom ...too much, and a little mystery and fear of getting caught is always good

I enjoyed the story even though it's not real it makes me wish I had a brother like that great read

And I bet most of you who are badmouthing this story favorited it too. Lots of stories on this site read like they were written by a 12 year old but every one of you guys wishes he could **** like that. Fantasy - that’s what it is all about!

at the stupid big dick 1 star!

I honestly can’t understand all the criticism. For fuck sake it’s only a Fantasy story people. Thank you D. I loved it. End of story... ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Seriously reads like it was written by a child. "And then I stuck my 14 inch dick into my sister and she loved it!". No build up, nonsense characters, childish terms.

Hell of a story. Love to read more !!!

I couldn't even finish it, I was laughing so hard. This reads like it was written by self deluded highschool kid. ' My cock is 12 feet long and 3 feet wide and I can impregnate any woman on the planet with just my imagination! Even die hard lesbians orgasm just from hearing my name!'

Sorry, but this was great, if you meant to make us laugh. If that wasn't your intention, then this was terrible.

One poster had critiques about the term Phi Jama Jama,but in all honesty that meaning made perfect sense,it was a play on words to describe the situation,not to show grammar errors.

As for Evie(Eva) and the rest I want to say I am glad she learned from her mistakes and apologized to her brother for treating him like shit all those years,now maybe Evie won't take her Brother for granted anymore,and maybe Evie,Amber,Mom,& Dale can grow closer and continue their Incestual Friendship Foursome for many years to come and if Dad finds out either try to seduce him to fuck Amber or Evie so they can become a Fivesome or if he is so disgusted by it let him leave,but hopefully its like the old addage of "The Family That Plays Together,Stays Together" and the can all join into the Family Orgy.That's my opinion.

You lost me at “Phi Jama Jama”. How hard is it to look up actual Greek letters?

I agree about having too much going on though. Mom's story could be a chapter onto itself. His sister and her friend deserve more writing. Your story telling is good. Liked the premise, but I'd suggest maybe taking it up a bit to a higher level. I can see why one reviewer said it sounds like a 14 wrote it. Not a bad thing but.. Practice makes perfect. Personally I'm not into fucking my mother, my sister, sure.

Could be even better with fewer story threads.

While fun and interesting the event with mom would have been better as a new stand alone story.

I will say, grammar and spelling was surprisingly on point. Surprising because even with that, it still felt like this was written by a 14-year old boy figuring that this is how things are going to be. Vocabulary and phrases, and most especially that ridiculous self description, read like a junior high paper. The story idea was fun but, grow up a bit will ya?

good story but would like more

Big cock?

Tall guy?

Muscly?

OH FUCK ME IM SO WET GODAMN LET ME HAVE YOUR CHILDREN

Loved the sister, friend, and Mother sex. A little long. but great fuck for sister and friend. Mother should have been on a second story.

Fuck them motards ...I happen to know exactly what you sere saying can be very true. When I was 20yrs old, my x-wife checked my size to be almost 10" and the first round I'd go 5 to 15 minutes then usually was hard again in 5 minutes but could go for 3+ hours after that and stay hard the whole time and blow at least 3 more loads. The longest I went was from 6:30 PM till 11:30 PM and only stopped then cause she had to go home. So you none believers go suck on something somewhere, oh and EAT SHIT AND DYE. And quite calling BS on these stories...just like its marked..its fiction motards.. dezurtdawg I thought it was a great story and I love it everytime I read it..I also like part2..keep writing awesome stories please.

Pretty Good But .. Like it has been Pointed out before .. I am Tired of Giant Huge DIcks Stories ..

The dick size was pretty silly, such a cliche that drags down the story.

Oh so hot, I love these Halloween stories. I could have done with a little less of him being so invincible so to speak. It was a solid 5 stars.

This story was posted in 2011. That story on the other site was posted im 2012. That person stole this story.

Yo isn't this the same story from sexstories.com-she started it

Even with your warning at the beginning. I wish there was a distinct scoring scale or category for absurd stories vs imaginable ones so they aren't ranked equivalently in the same group.

I can honestly say that this has happened to me before but it was an accident I didnt know my older sister was there and i was drunk and she had a mask on so when we did it she actually hasn't stopped coming to me for sex lately but it all happened the same way it did in the story at a frat party than it ended up happening at home to. I don't care what people think but if I can provide that for my sisters than fuck it I love them and they love me.

What a complete load of bullshit.

I thought it was great, as someone else said, so over the top, but what a ride (pun intended.)

I've read thousands of mainstream fiction and scifi. I've read a libraries worth of erotic fiction.

I just wanted to say you have the knack for making a Story, Not just word porn.

Keep it up.

There is no need for a story to be that long. This is a story, not a book...

Thumps up for the try.

Would not mind reading a follow up or 2

So ridiculously over the top, still I somehow managed to get my pleasure from it all.

dezurtdawg here!

Hi guys n gals, just a quick note to let all of you know a few things.

First of all, I AM NOT DEAD........YET!

Besides my writer's block, my ticker started acting up a few years back and after way too many trips to the doctor they figured it out and prescribed meds to help with it. (My arteries are clean, just a non-correctable low expulsion factor. IF you know what that means you have my sympathy.) So I bounced from good days to bad days and the doctor helped to exacerbate that problem with constant changes to my meds. Shit!

Finally had a pacemaker implanted and, that, along with different meds seems to have stabilized things for me. So I've been slowly working on my long dormant stories. Unfortunately, while all of this went on I have forgotten my password to get onto my author's page to upload new stories that I have ready. Every time I ask for the reset password code it turns out that it won't work and thus far the help people here have been NO HELP!

So anyway, wish me luck at getting that fixed. I will try to add this note to all of my stories, or at least the last part for those that are series. Take care, all of you, and don't forget to vote!

dezurtdawg

Spider-Man fucking Robin... Hmmm; I'm pretty sure there's at least one or two more fanfictions somewhere on the 'net about that pairing..... XD

Actually in the story it was HER wrist, not his. And just as a data point, when I was 30 I had a girlfriend who often compared my cock to her forearm and the size of her wrist. We both knew she was joking about the size of her forearm, but she wasn't joking about the size of her wrist. We got a tape measure and checked one time. Oh, she was 5' 11', not a tiny girl.

Either you've never seen a wrist or you've never seen a dick. I'm not sure which is more likely. Just a quick back of the envelope math - pretty sure a dick as big around as a wrist on a guy that size (six inches, assuming he's roughly my size) would be about 16 inches long.

WOW!!!!! LUCKY FELLOW.

Great story! Loved every part of it. (including the 'happy ending' of winning his crush's heart & other parts)

Kinda wish it could continue. (though I am not sure what more you could do with it)

But if you have ideas, please, feel free to try. 'Cause this is an AWESOME story!

Your story has everything, a great story line with unbeliveable sex. Write more more!!!!!

Yes, its on heck of a story now that Mom has been done by Spidey / Dale her son and that both his sister Evie and Amber have proven to Robin he is a hot hung guy with a lot of talent. It would be interesting if all 3 women did Dale over as a group with their combined skills and he could do them all !! So good and YES we Must have more soon .....

Fantastic! Over the top, but soooooo hot, especially when mom got involved. Wish I'd had a sister (and an 8 inch cock).

A whole lot of fucking fun, I enjoyed every word!!!

A most enjoyable saga. It'll be great reading the further adventures with mom and Amber and Evie entertaining themselves, and all the fun the four will have together.

I have read both stories and i fucking love them please Wright a 3rd i want to know what happens next with the 3 Fuck buddies. Can't wait to read more thanks for everything

The guy who wrote this is either a virgin, delusional or way over confident. We get it the guy has a big dick, and what's with all the measurements? Constantly telling us how many inches of this or that.

I started back on my regimen of exercises to enlarge my cock! I want to be this guy!

Great story but I love when he cums INSIDE sister, mum and Amber!

I really thought from the title that the Sister was gonna have more responsibility of the plot than the magical dick that enthralls all who see it or its outline. Would probably catrgorize it as Mind Control.

THE ANONYMOUS PERSON SAYING ALL CAPS YES I TYPED IT IN ALL CAPS STOP BITCHING ABOUT IT.

First, to the commenter who calls him a "lying faggot" for his description of "his" penis, THIS IS NOT REAL. It's called "literature" for a reason, not "true stories". Sure, it's fun to pretend they are true, and many people claim their story is. A few of them may even be inspired by truth. But it's fiction at the end of the day, so calling someone a "liar" for their fictional description of their fictional characters dick is a sign of real stupidity.

It could be better. It's basically just a big cliche, no character depth or even guilt or any other issues about breaking a deep taboo....just "hey that's wrong. But okay, let's fuck". And one again, not interested in mom-fucking. All set with that.

PART TWO IS CALLED My sister Eva continues it all

Please write another part of the story is the

Really want to find out more about the story

Your wife fucked 100s of men and then you cleaned them out!!! Now she is dead and you hate her and we hate you, you POS!