by dezurtdawg
Pure sex, filled debauchery I love it. Compete fantasy land, but great wank, material and fun.
Now he is waiting for his dad to come home to fuck him too, then his first neighbor, then the aunt etc. all of them in just one going. You should choose Superman costume, not the Spiderman.....all BS.
Wow! The grammar warrior queens are alive 'n' kickin'.
I enjoyed the story, well done.
PLEASE LEARN WHEN THE HELL TO CORRECTLY END YOUR RUN-ON PARAGRAPHS!!!
Only 2 Star for Incompetent Writing.
You spent so much time talking about your huge cock, you forgot to create a real story. Your real cock must be a source of embarrassment for you.
That was a fantastic story. I stayed hard the whole time reading
Please continue
i would love to see this continue and what happens when he gets married to Amber and his sister moves in with them and mom and her sexcapades.
Omg 😲 ❤️ what a story , Love my brother for the same reason , he's huge , but my love story is real .
I loved the way you kept the sex going , the story line is totally believable
It is interesting how many people are jealous of the main character. I'm not jealous of him but I envy him. Sure, He is an outlier in his size, stamina, and technique, but I suspect that such specimens really exist even if they are only 1 in 10,000. Enjoy his conquests vicariously. He didn't just brag about himself; The girls also were all amazed that he was the best they ever had. The author did a good job of establishing that these weren't just average girls. Amber and Evie we're described as being among the hottest cheerleaders ever. Girls who would only be approached by men who considered themselves to be studs so these gals knew what good was. And don't forget the "Lily Munster" girl who first met him. The guy was living a dream, enjoy it with him.
Good story. Wish he hadn't let his sister know it was him. Before he left the party, he should have returned to "Lily Munster" who encountered upon arrival at party.
Absolutely spectacular, just loved this story reminded me of a time that the same situation happened to me with sister and her bff
What a serious jerk off fest! At least a two cum tale for most of the jerkoffs reading this, and over 3.8 million reads. Sheeit!! Damn near 8 million loads of jizz shot to this story. Wowza! I don't know about fucking mom, milf that she may be, but definitely sis and Amber deserved the bone. Ok, so I gotta go add another shot to the total cums for this fine piece of nasty smut.
It is a completely over the top omega male power fantasy, that has zero baring on reality. That said, it was damned entertaining!
Really hot, must've read it like 3 times by now. Always so satisfying when he gets his revenge on his bitch of a slutty sister. When she comes back in the morning for more, he really should have drawn it out a lot and tortured her until she was totally begging and offering herself as her lifelong 3-hole exclusive cum-dumpster. That would the real way to get some revenge :)
Then Amber gets put in her place too. I just love when shallow, vapid bitches that think they're better than everyone (and ironically are some of the worst people you could meet) get put in their place. It's a kind of satisfaction that is hard to come by.
A nice addition when the mom gets her turn later. I wonder who's next on the give-them-the-best-fucking-they'll-ever-get list...
The dialogue was a tad over the top at times, entire paragraphs of "oh fuccckkk im cuuuuummiiiing" and what not. I felt like it didn't add much; you could have achieved the effect with much shorter screams of pleasure. But I guess it's a personal style choice for each author.
Also, there seems to be another chapter at least. My Sister Eva Continues It All. I don't think I saw that before. I know what I'm reading next :)
It could be ok, if it had not gone to mother and the use of low life language, there is no finesse in this story. Try to be use better language. Just Fock and cum, does not make a story good.
Sometimes you just need a well written, hot action, never could be real smut story, and this was it! Rose to the occasion more than once while reading this. More than a one time read for sure.
The angry sex with his sister, at the party, was incredibly hot! The rest was good, too.
3/10 writing was okay ig.. but i feel like it moved too fast in terms of describing the sex.. idk.. there’s no build up or anything.. sorry seems to be written by someone who got all their experience from watching porn
Absolutely fantastic!!!! Loved this story. He gets a total tri-fuck-ta -- the revenge on sister fuck, he gets the girl fuck, and calm the milf fuck too. Like I said fanfuckingtastic. Would love a follow up maybe xxxmas story yummm
Although the sex part was fun, I keep thinking that if this were in “Loving Wives“ it would have an entirely different slant. She would be portrayed as a cheating wife & hubby as a cuckold. The part where she says “your father doesn’t do that anymore.” Sounds like she hasn’t communicated to him. I personally don’t know any man who would turn down his wife for sex (unless she is terribly overweight) even then if there’s still 💗 love, he’d probably still like a blow job.
Bill S.
The story was technically well written, but sex is less effective/arousing when it only consists of pages and pages of high energy, slamming, screaming, endless endurance and cumming, passing out, etc. What in art is called “light and shade,” a change in dynamics, is more effective. Grand finales are intended to be an exciting climax to a story, not the majority of a story. You gave a glimpse for a bit with the mother, but it was too little too late. I would love to see you expand a story with more nuance and erotica.
I think the story was pretty hot. There were a couple of things that took me out of the fantasy but only one that really matters. As a woman, I'd like to implore you to please stop mentioning banging into the cervix or even the cervix at all. It hurts to hit it and especially to slam into it and it's over all, just incredibly not sexy to even mention it. Lol please leave the poor girls' cervixes out of the story? Lol it made me wince/cringe every time it came up.
Hot story... Damn hot. I fucked my sisters friend at a costume party. I thought it was my fiance. They were both dressed as Cinderella and it was in a dark bathroom. My fiance never found out but it was great.
Wow, that was a great read. Loved it. I can somewhat relate to it. I fucked my sister at a fancy dress party, not knowing it was her to start with. ( Her mask came off ) and once I knew, it pushed me over the edge. Couldn't stop, and kept going.
Keep up the good work. Looking forward to more stories.
Really not a fan of her being some slut that would let a but of entitled frat boy assholes gang bang her for sport, until her brother with the SuperCock comes along to save her. Odds are, if she really was like that he'd end up with a whole slew of STD's to worry about. Not sure I need to read about a cum dumpster getting fucked like the town bicycle, when practically every story on this site is like that already. her being his sister *could* have been a spicy spark of interest, but you made her into a whore for the entire university first, ruining it. Cucking his own father, too? Any trace of interest long gone by then, and I see you have a sequel to go full tilt harem mode, the death knell for any story line.
Another 5 star, damn this was a hot story, hope there is more if not later, more with MoM & daughter also
Oddly enough this kinda reminds me of spider man except for the incest between brother and sister and mother and son possibly resulting in two babies that don’t even know there brother / father/ uncle for the sister baby was the guy that got both there mom’s pregnant with them ex specially since you don’t tell us if they mom and sister are on birth control
I liked it, and since I know that it is fictional, not real, then I do not care about his size, like all these fucking anonymous whiners. My one real complaint would be that I do not think that eva was a bitch to him or that she hated him, they both seem to have had a pretty normal sibling relationship. Dale was not perfect either, always trying to horn in on Eva's friends, that would get old and tiresome really quick. So I thpought it was pretty good and I put my name on my comment, which it was everybody should do, especially those who want to whine and complain.
Literal example of "...and then everyone clapped" meme. Not funny or self-aware enough to be parody. Not good or remotely believable enough to be serious. Genuinely sounds written by a relatively bright middle-schooler. Bright, but still juvenile. Got through a couple pages and had to stop. Violated suspension of disbelief and made of self-insert superman cringe.
Good luck in your endeavours.
yeah, the size stuff was just over the top in the usual Literotica way, where only a tree trunk seems to be acceptable, and the anal pretty much ruined what could have been a pretty epic story
What a load of crap! The guy is so huge that there's no way that any young girl would let him do anal on her, yet our hero is successful. The very next day, both of the women are oh, soooooo sore but they can't resist him . Then the mother gets involved?
As my father used to tell me when we had the farm," Don't step in that, son, that's bullshit."
All I want to know is..."will this family adopt me"? I need this in my life!!!!!
Far too much "my cock is the biggest, widest, longest ever", "I cum by the 3 litre bucketful", "I have the best technique ever and can last forever".
It was just so ridiculous, it wasn't possible to get into the story properly.
Me and my BFF had a 3 way with a well hung guy it lasted for hours made me and her cum many times. I did let him fuck my ass also she did too. We both were sore for days after it wad worth it
That was absolutely amazing. I really loved this story. Thank you so sharing it. I would love to read more if you decide to continue this in a series
Why do authors always have to Eff Up a good brother/sister story by bringing parents into it? It just RUINS it.
Just imagine her reaction in a couple of weeks when she finds out she pregnant I mean heck he would have to keep a secret while knowing he the father to his own baby brother or sister and his niece and nephew since he was spider man I could see him slyly saying why not name the babies Peter Parker
You write quite well, the story was creative and flows well. Personally I'm not a fan of long detailed sex scenes. Just not my thing. You still did well.
NOT Ch.2 !!!
Oops I have the title of the second story wrong.
It's "MY SISTER EVA CONTINUES IT ALL".
Search that title or click on "dezurtdawg"'s name above for his list of stories.
This Story Is Still Hot The next in the ( so far ) two part series is available by searching this title and adding Ch.2. Or click on the authors name for a complete list of all of "dezurtdawg"''s works ( same with all the authors on Lit. ).
OK anony mouse-- Trailer Park Trash ?? Sounds like you're complaining about incest in the genre of incest/taboo. But just in case you are pontificating from one of the Northeastern United States. Enter --"Legality of incest" in your search engine. Go to the Wiki. page on the U.S.A.. You will notice that of the 2.75 states where incest between consenting "adults" * is- well- NOT illegal. Two states (N.J. and R.I.) are in the Northeast and the .75 state ( Ohio ) is in the mid west ( which only prosecutes parents or "parental figures" ).
* " Adults" Age of consent in R.I. is sixteen the other two are eighteen.
The Anonymous who mentioned going poly/harem/group. Started by going for his Sister's friend. This is the incest/taboo category. So that's two unless you're here by accident. Pulling Mom into a story in this manner has been done before-quite a bit. But well done in this instance.
The Anonymous who mentioned cuckholding. My understanding the cuck has to be present or at least aware of what is happening.
Another author that has a great taboo premise, and ruins it by spoiling the secret and going poly/harem/group bullshit, which totally wrecks what was awesome just a few lines before.
Very well written, made for an extremely enjoyable read. In short. I was dripping pre-cum from my tiny 7 inch pathetic penis. 😁. 5*
Mother, sister and future bride all within one day!
Great story, great characters, great sex and great ending! Makes one wish he had an 'influencer' like that of his own. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
I read this story several years ago and loved it then as I still do now. Over the top? Fuck it is just a story and a very funny and fun loving story to boot!! Come on people just enjoy a story for what it is and quit slamming a story because it seems improbable. MY OPINION and mine alone. It was a HOOT!! KUDOS BIG TIME!
Great story before the cuckolding.
Not really needed for a good & complete tale.
4/5
Bill S.
Great read a total E Ticket. It flowed, it made perfect sense and I hope I find a sequel.
very well done! HOWEVER...i kept stubbing my toes on the never-ending "off of"!
off is self sufficient - whoever thought an extra "of" added to "off" is more literate, sounds really stooopid...just stop it.
I loved it until mom got involved I'm no fan of mom and son sex but good story.
I found the style a bit immature and I felt that Amber wasn’t really necessary but it was fun and full of fantasy. It was a wild ride, good job. 👍🏼
This isn't a favorite genre of mine, but I'm glad I read it. It was a fun read.
Nicely done.
Boy of boy was that a good read. Looking forward to a sequel. Definitely need to see your other works now.
nearly all that we read are here is fiction sort of based on some of our behaviors solely for entertainment. I was consulted before I was married, both my wife and I received a great amount of wisdom from it. one was (we don't own each other). ( promises are dangerous) learn to understand our roles as husband. partner, lover, father, family, friends, and then learn your wife's, and children. everyone has their own personal beliefs. secrets and promises are the most common thing to do is be broken causing pain. the man and woman who counseled us said, (we all do make misjudgements). (always try to a better than you were yesterday). this story points that out clearly, and forgiveness is good for the soul.
That was great I just wish there was a sequel preferably with them all ending up pregnant
If only she wasn't married, a cheating slut, and teaching her son to disrespect his father. She could have divorced him, without ruining the relationship between father and son like this.
If I was Dale, I would've fucked Eva once and then never fucked her again to make other guys not give her the same pleasure.
loved the parts with Amber and Evie best, I would love to be Evie and have him for a brother
I liked this story because of the holloween costume and the fitment "trouble". Then comes mom and she sounds like MILF also. Then the offer of any time or place. The proposal was good as he can still fu## sis and mom.
Oh my oh my what a fantastic story indeed. A bit heavy on his cock size and stamina, but this story isn't supposed to be about only that. The real plot was to overcome the LITTLE BROTHER title. Thank you for a great story.
'Wildbill