All Comments on 'My Sister Eva Started It All'

This one definitely calls for a followup chapter. Very enjoyable read.

I really enjoyed the story. Well written and well paced. Look forward to many more stories from you.

Definitely a Five Star effort!

I loved your story. I just had surgury yesterday, and this story brought me to pure ecstasy. I wish you the best of luck on winning the Halloween contest. But I really hope you continue with another chapter, even if its with another title. Maybe the next one should involve a 4some, with mom, Amber, Evie and her brother. Maybe the mom and her daughter would taste eachother. Overall, a true master of erotic literature. I applause you.

Of course my stories are a bit OTT! As you say, they are fantasies and are thus allowed to go where ever I chose to send them. Not much into 2-1/2 inch dicks pumping(?)into 400 pound BBWs. I also only write fiction where the sky is the limit. My life is my life and shall never be written about here. Glad you liked it.

As to the other comment about my use of 'a "Tales of Wells Fargo" reference.' I have no idea what you are referencing so I will have to re-read it to figure it out. As far as the next couple of months for them, just hang on to your horses... it's coming.

dezurtdawg

Just like your other stories, this one was interesting and fun to read. Hope you write many more in the future because I am always watching when you submit one. Thanks alot for your time and effort.

It is obvious that you just don't like my stories. I have no problem with that! There are several writers on this site whose stories I despise. The difference is, I just won't read them anymore, but I see no reason to comment about how I detest them. What is the point?

So next time you see my name as the author please just skip right over the tale. How about it, do we have a deal?

dezurtdawg

Glad you liked it! Since I posted this as an entry to the Halloween contest I am not allowed to have another chapter. That will not prevent me from continuing it with another slightly different title. I'm just trying to work the title so it follows in order on my author's page. And yes, it will be 'action packed' as others have called my stuff.

dezurtdawg

I appreciate the comment, but hey,you've been on here nearly two years and still haven't posted a story yet. How can a writer learn how to NOT write an "utter bullshit narrative" if you don't show me how! Just a thought.

To those of you anonymous ones who get pissed when the writer comments back - get a life! By the way, I'll be busy responding so control your urges to bitch about each of them. Thanks.

dezurtdawg

Hey pussy, how about you write something or at least have the balls to post under an account name.

I liked the story, perhaps a tad OTT but it's a fantasy and it was a good read no matter what.

You must be in my age bracket to use a "Tales of Wells Fargo" reference.

Too bad we don't know what happened November 2 through January 2 of the next year. Did they live happily ever after?

Of course that dude posted anonymously. Pussy. I just don't have an account. This story is great and you NEED to do a couple more chapters, not just one.

You know something D, as soon as I read your first story on literotica, I KNEW I shouldn't indulge anymore. I'm not surprised with the content here; just thought I should give it (& you) another chance, & boy was I sorry.

I agree with the poster. This is one Frigging teen boy fantasy. WTF??

Please stop posting....You totally suck! All your stories SUCKD!!

Leave. Don't come back.

one hot story you are great at keeping the action going when is the next chapter cumming

WOW!! Great story, I was totally into it the whole way through. I couldn't put my iPad down I had to keep reading. Please keep up the good work.

Polly :-)

I stayed hard the whole story ...Incredible

good job good read from start to finish

this kinda sounded more like a teenage boy's fantasy, a dream, i didn't really believe it but it's such a good story, don't get me wrong :) <3

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!

Fantastic story, one of the best I have ever read on this site. It had everything. I'll br reading more of your stories, but this will be hard to top

top three incest writer.

I think it's good sure it was totally unrealistic but who cares its made so the reader has to get some relief.or the will exploded

I like your stories, but this one was just another huge dick, brainless sister and utter bullshit narrative!