by flashgordon562006
A stupid plot and emotionless characters as deep as in a bad cartoon.
In short, an unbelievable story that I didn't bothet to finish.
I find it funny that people would think this is true or has any factual basis. On the other side, the story had possibilities. I liked the characters, but the story was dry of emotions or detail of them loving each other. I have read your stories before and am disappointed in in this one. Maybe you can try this one again and let the brother and sister explore each other. Thanks for your time and Imagination.
Your story is well written and very arousing. You set the stage well for how Ronnie and his scientist sister first he became a study participant; then his sexy / hot sister sucks him off and then the start screwing each other and that set the stage for a very erotic story. Adding their Mother, who has the same problem with Dad brought it to a new level. Cannot wait to see what happens when Dad joins in. Sure hope you write more about this, thank you !!
A bit inconsistent. Needs life built into the characters and story to feel realistic.
I loved it right up until the mother got involved. I don’t like parent/children incest stories, only brother/sister, and they can’t just be about sex. They have to be love stories, too.