All Comments on 'My Sister-in-Law'

This dialogue is just criminally ridiculous. Unless you're going for a pure parody thing here, shit like "what a massive male monument!" Seriously? Sadly, it only gets worse from there.

Another one of your greats. Thank you for sharing!

Great bit of fantasy. Really entertaining.

You must be one of the most prolific writers. I cannot imagine how many times you think a guy can/could cumulative in a weekend and still be walking.

Do feel sorry for his brother though, no more friction while fucking his own wife ? ?

Written like a horny 14 year old...

It's too bad that unlike the brother, neither the protagonist nor the author could see past Amelia's breasts.

Well, yeah ... it is ridiculous. That's the point. It's completely over-the-top. For some people, this sort of thing is arousing. For others, it's comedy. So please, my fellow commenters, quit the denigrating comments like "written like a horny 14 year old" (or, if that is intended as a compliment, indicate as much) and "criminally ridiculous" (though, to be fair, that commenter did at least admit that it worked as parody).

always wanted to bang my sister inlaw like this

Another good one. Thumbs up 5 stars