All Comments on 'My Sister is a WebCam Babe Ch. 02'

Please continue this story soon, it is very hot.

Why capitalize their names? It’s distracting and bad grammatically.

There are literally two named characters through the whole story. Capitalization isn’t warranted and if you think your audience will forget or not notice, you insult them.

Other than that it’s a hot story. Could be longer.

The first letter of proper names are always capitalized. Always.

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Now, if you are referring to the first time the character is mentioned and every letter of their entire name is capitalized, that's another matter. However, it's not really that grammatically incorrect to do it once to call out the character's name. However, it was done in the first chapter and is redundant after that initial use.

Hi,

Firstly forget the haters. Proper Nouns are always capitalized, good for you. Secondly I hope you write a third part. This is getting pretty hot.

I waited so long for part 2, please don't make us wait as long for part 3!

Proper names are always capitalised.

I just found this story and went back to read part one first, Awesome!!! Looking forward to the twins continuation! Keep em cumming, mfs1390034! Oh and screw the grammar goons. This erotica at it's finest, most of us don't care about spelling or punctuation.

.....as fuck. Hard pass

@Omart57

Those of us that have more than just a passing acquaintance with English, find that miss spellings, poor grammar, and typos frustrating-- they make us stop reading, to decipher what the writer is attempting to say.