All Comments on 'My Sister Jackie Ch. 06'

i thought this story long abandoned. thanks so much for trying for a resolution.

Im glad to see you back and continuing with this story. The best Ive read so far!

I can feel every sentinse and hold my breath for the next paragraph.

Please continue.

Your story line is very compelling and the character dvelopment is superb. You have the gift. Please continmue writing. I hope these two will ultimately find happiness with each other.

I just discovered your story with this latest chapter. Rather than starting here I went back to the beginning and fell completely in love with your story. It is told so well. The emotions are all so real and excellently expressed. I sincerely hope you continue with the story and the characters can resolve their deep-seated hang-ups. They really deserve to be together.

A fascinating couple whose story should be told

I hope you'll continue this story soon. I hope you CAN continue - from my own attempts at writing, I know how emotions can overwhelm one and cause one to shut down in self defense, stopping the flow of words. And how, when one finally feels able to continue, the story is not the same - has changed and must be restarted - or abandoned. But this story is too good to abandon, and I hope you'll find a way to keep going.

I stumbled on the last chapter and read the entire story. It is about love and need, so sweet. Write more and have him put a baby in his sister's belly so they can marry and be happy forever. Sometimes an incest story is beautiful like this one.

there's no reason in the world these two can't spend their lives together. Sis has a different last name form being married and besides, who's going to ask a couple to prove their not related by blood? It's time (or way past time) for brother to explain just why they're free to live as a married couple.

If I'm wrong here, because I'm overlooking something, please let me know what I've missed.

People that madly in love don't let the "incest" thing get in the way. These two can't breathe without each other. That's the beauty of this story.

It's only been a week, and I'm so anxious to read the next chapter. I sure hope they get together for good! I agree, he needs to get find a way to marry her. Keep on writing! You are G R E A T ! ! !

Would like to see it resovled, no matter if they stay together or go their seperate ways

He should give her some space and let her decide, whether to do what she wants to, I think the problem was that it was going to new level, it's one thing to sleep with someone it's another to commit yourself to a relationship. Would love to see how it would work out, though that depends on what the author is thinking at the time

This is by far the best story on here.

It's been a year. 'Just re-read this series, and hope all the tensions will soon be resolved - however the resolution might occur. These characters, like real people in a similar situation, deserve to get on with their lives, however that might be. Please, Wes, let us know soon how they finally decide.

Wish you would finish the story, however you see it ending.

Really kept my interest and the tension felt real. Good read. Love to have this story continue.

You seem conflicted by your own story. Your introductory statements indicate that you have trouble with the relationship you created for them.

There two possible ways to make it work for all three of you. 1) The envelope marked personal contains the adoption papers of one of the two "siblings". Or 2). They accept how they feel, realize what they have is more powerful than societal conventions, and take advantage of her having a different last name, marry, and live happily ever after.

Of course there multiple variations to explore but 1) gives an easy way out of your personal dilemma, while 2) offers a romantic conclusion for those of us who like deep emotional endings with smiles on both faces.

for the next chapter or finale. The story has developed well and kept my interest. I'm a romantic and would like to see them work out whatever the issues are and be happy together. Based on the way their lives have been it only seems fair they get a real chance at happiness. In any event it would be nice to see a conclusion or next chapter soon.

This seems unfinished I want to read another story in this series. She needs to end up with him. And he needs to beat the shit out of the person who tried to force himself on her.

Not being critical, just stating my mind. I think you have devoted way too much time to not have this story turn out right for the romantics among us. I used to be a straight pervert but with my old age I have become a romantic, somewhat. Just do something (even if it is wrong as my Daddy used to say). I don't want to be looking through this section in 18 months and see that you finally finished it either to my satisfaction or not to my satisfaction. It is not important how I feel but other readers are interested, also.

You cannot start a story and leave it half finished. If you had an issue with this, you should never have started it. These two need to have a resolution. Either they stay together and are happy or they separate and are miserable for the rest of there lives but you have left it at a crucial point. Please finish this story.

you just left us hanging at the end

It's been nearly three years since chapter 6 appeared, leaving us hanging on for the end.

Will there be one ?

You have written other stories in the meantime, so please if you are still writing, finish this story: please ?

Coming up. Yes, I know it's been years, I I really apologize for the delay.

This is a great story that, other than being siblings, reflects aspects of my life...

PLEASE finish this one way or the other. Hopefully as a couple(LOL)...

Is there any news on how soon Chapter 7 will be published ?

Thanks !

Will there be anymore chapters or is it an unfinished story?

Thanks for your patience, yes there will be a final chapter asap.

We need to know how this ends.

How does this end. Good hopefuls.

I Just got into reading. Please finish

you need to finish this off as you stopped just when it was getting good.,

iI sure hope you finish this great story,and thank you for writing it.

Is that it??????¿