by massageaddict
Nicely written, good story and a delightful twist. Lots of fun, thanks!
I definitely didn't see that ending coming. Him raping his sister. Definitely a plot twist.
holy crap that was hot. definitely loved this one. hope you continue it in some way.
Really??? Awesome story and full of imagery. But 2 pages? Please continue, there are so many ways this story could go. Again fantastic writing and thanks for sharing!
Measure 4" on a string and wrap it around a cylinder: you'll see that it's not girthy at all. It would need to be over 5" around at least to be considered a 'thick cock'.
5'10", 110 lbs kicked me right out of the story. That's anorexic territory.
Can’t wait for the next chapter.
This story has so many exciting twists .
Please keep going.
Excellent story .
A well planned liaison by Kiko and Jen. Looking forward to the next chapter.
All that use of force and the degrading language just feels like a turn-off -- and actually feels not very realistic.
Yes, a very different story line but very well written, good characters who bring the story along and now that he screwed his sister and her frfiend; I wonder what his sister will do now that she's sen his huge cock ?? I hope they play together too and his sister tells him how much she likes his body and huge cock etc. Cannot wait for more, thank you !!
Sorry, interested right up until she said no.
Erotic fantasy maybe, but feeding the misogynist element's rape fantasy does nothing for me.
She said no.