All Comments on 'My Sister Kelsey Pt. 01'

Don't keep us in suspense for too long!!

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Good start of a storyline - but, it does seem rushed. Slow it down, discovery at that age was the most fun...

But I wish there were more dialogues and details.

Less I said, she said.

It feels like reading a journal not a story.

Nevertheless I enjoyed it.

Liked the innocence and cuteness of characters. Good concept.

Great teenage sex story start !!

It seems jerky because everything is happening so fast. Let them touch each other and appreciate the feeling of his hand on her tit/nipple before going on to other things.

Otherwise it is a good stroke story.

Again? Another cock tease author. There won't be a Pt. 2.

This is something I have fantasized about even though I don't have a sister. I always wished that I had.