All Comments on 'My Sister Maggie Pt. 02: Beautiful'

I hope that you keep this story going! You’ve got me hooked! Thank you!

Amazing writing...so vivid and compelling. I'm ready for the HBO mini series.

Dear Author,

I expected brother to be gently lovingly shaving his sis Maggie and after she gets smooth ,plant a big wet sloppy open mouthed drooling kiss on her smooth pussy lips? That Would be the most natural reaction and I would have gladly let her decide on whether she wanted to suck my cock or give a simple oral sex! Four out of five!

Still a bit weird, but I am looking forward to the next chapter.

There is still way more to be told, right?

As she said, wow.

Patience, dear reader, patience. All things (even oral sex) come to those who wait...

... can't wait for them to realise their true love for each other. Don't make us wait too long... please.

No pregnancy though please.

She seems willing, he is less so. They've masturbated together in the tub. What could possibly be next?

Excellent story. Patiently waiting for next installment.

5 Star so far :)

What a wonderful story. Their journey is heartbreaking but feels so inevitable. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Do you want to continue this?

please continue

Well, irishman101 your readers are waiting, not to be impatient but it has been 2 1/2 years and pretty soon it will be forgotten if you don't continue the story. Well written to this point but needs more. 5/5

Great story, but please continue it. Please.

Yes, WOW!

Only gets a 4/5 because the story ends while there is so much more to read about.