All Comments on 'My Sister Mandi'

Since you asked my likes ;)

Looking the the pages this story had and the initial start of the story, i believed that this was going to be a very dramatic kind of story. But it just turned out be just sex scenes after sex scenes which added nothing to the Characters. Although i won't complain about what i assumed the story was going to be and got disappointed. But i really don't think that this story was worth all the 9 pages.

Very nice read. Not to many mistakes to throw of the flow. Enjoyed the new girlfriend part. Keep it up.

Switching from present tense to past tense in the narrative is awkward. Probably best to choose one and stick with it.

Great story, I'm so glad that they found each other. And Fuck No, No Watersports ever, (except for playing in the pool).

I couldn't get through the first page. It read like a book report rather than a story. Sentences were repetitive, didn't flow to tell story, and often changed tenses.

Great story but the title is misleading... It implies that the brother and sister will end up together

To be honest because of the last part this story is so different it shouldn't be in the incest category..

Also a shaved pussy doesn't make it more sensitive it actually takes away sensitivity and exposes it to stds that the hair helps prevent ..

Now overall the story was good its well paced but it should have been broken up into 2 parts because of the different relationships and the second relationship feels forced because it was rushed in all honesty you should have put it in its own story to give it the time and pacing it needed to make sense I mean they just met and are having sex and practically expressing their undying love for each other.... See first part of story involving infatuation.... This makes the characters actions in the first part very selfish and calloused as he clearly loves his sister yet doesn't want a relationship but he takes advantage of her and his mom and fucks them both anyway and when feelings surface his reaction is to go and get a girlfriend which I know that part can happen sometimes but more often than not it generally develops much slower no way would him and his new girlfriend feel so sure of each other on the first date that they end up in bed the only way that makes sense is if they knew each other beforehand...... Anyway long story short this story needs to be broken up into two parts one with the incest with his mom and sister and the other with just the relationship between him and the girlfriend

Well written story, based on the title the storyline didn't go where I thought it would, I had presumed that Mandi and John would end up together. Still gets 5/5

Very well done my friend this story ended in the best way ever both 9f the stars came to find there is another that they can love. I just this week I read this found a lady that has brought love to my life that I feel I can trust not to hurt me. I hope my first date goes as well as John's. But I've not been fucking a sister or my mom. But very good story

Good story but end need to finish second chapter can’t drop mom an sister like club whores