All Comments on 'My Sister My Aunt And Amy Oh My'

Very interesting, hope there is more to cum, thanks for your time and effort.

look forward to more stories from you...

It was a good attempt, but you need to clean up a few things such as:

Dialogue - They should be on their own lines, with people clearly identified.

Scene - you need to set the scene better. The difference between a quickie story and a great story is in the details.

Emotion - Emotions in literature are like food. You need to describe everything that's causing the eroticism to occur, otherwise it's basic and not very entertaining.

More, More. More. More.

Great story, kept my dick hard. It was exciting to see the women make necked amends fto the lucky guy.

Great

What was Amy to you and did u and Amy ever date

Olin tyttöystävän kanssa saunassa, kun sisko tuli saunaan. Saunan jälkeen nussimme paljaalla kolmistaan.

I kinda liked this story but ultimately I think it would have been better if Brother,Sister,Aunt,and Amy had come together and had a wild foursome and have the girls swap and while one would be fucking Brother the others could Lez Out and eat each other then switch places so Brother could fuck all 3 Girls.

Oh and have him cum in all 3 and they each have his babies,and they all decide to live with Aunt and raise their babies to continue the love they all share and teach them Incest is Best.

Great mix of humiliation and 'revenge.'

Good story. Glad it didn't turn into an orgy, kinda liked the secrets.