All Comments on 'My Sister/My Idol'

But he did get the brother a piece of ass

not worth comment

This story just made me angry. Not saying it's a bad story, but just thinking about me being the guy and Josh being like that angered me, and i had homicidal thoughts. I would kill anyone who put me in the situation Josh put Eva's brother in.

some body should kill that s0bof eva boyfriend the kid should have cut his dick off the minute he stuck in his girlfriend!!!!!!!!

The situation was bad enough but his girlfriend asking " are you in yet" is one of the worst things someone can say to a guy. Surprised that he didn't tear into all of them, and sis just made it worse.

Minus 1 star for penny letting Josh fuck her

Minus 1 star for Eva treating her brother like shit

Minus 1 star for the brother for not killing Josh for fucking Penny

Minus 1 star for a fucked up story

Negative 5 Stars

Dude, just no. That poor guy would be killing himself after that, sister let's boyfriend treat him like shit, check. Girlfriend let's the bastard fuck her. Check. Sister just makes it worse afterwards, check. Letting him fuck your gf and risk getting her pregnant instead of your sis, check. This story is just terrible! Please, don't do that again.

He doesn't want to get Eva pregnant so he cums in her cunt anyways? I don't understand how that makes sense.

Not sure what I just read but whatevs

Dude, what a crock story, shoulda thought it out a bit more 1/5 for effort

wow, probably the worst story ever written!

i guess u like to be bullied and humilated, o did i forget cuckholded.. whatever.. its for fantasy..

negative 5

pls stop writing!

this story must be deleted

terrible, you should take it down before anyone else reads it.

This was complete bullshit and poorly written get the fuck out of here!

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote. Eat shit annony you fag!

This story was horse shit he should have punched the jock in the nuts when he tried anything figure out the knob had a shrimp turned out his sister and girlfriend are allergic to shrimp then whipped out his dick and the girls went all notice me Senpi then he banged them both and made the shrimp boy his bitch

This story was fantastic, loved it. Hope you write more stories like it. I love the theme of a bully fucking a wimp's sister.

Ignore all the comments from idiots talking about how they'd be all macho and punch anybody who treated their sister like that blah blah. It's a cuckold story, the humiliation is the thrill, I get that. That being said: 1) Josh can't get Eva preggers but he can come in Penny's cunt who's also not on birth control? None of that shit makes sense. 2) Some physical description of Eva beyond her having big tits and a great ass, would've been much appreciated. Like she's supposed to be the narrator's idol and we don't even know what she looks like!

Will there be a part two?

I get it was about bullying however there is few issues 1 had no story plot it went straight I'm going to Bully you to fuck your gf 2 how did he go from can't fuck your sister cause she ain't birth control and didn't have any condoms to fucking the gf without a condom and cums in her when she's not on birth control either makes no sense why did they Bully him to start with and what kind of sister was she for not even trying to stand up for her brother 99 percent of the time that doesn't happen if you are going write a story make believable this 1 wasn't

The story had no plot it was wam bam kind of thing that and the dude couldn't fuck the sister cause no condom and she wasn't on birth control but he could fuck the girlfriend without a condom and also wasn't on birth control that makes no sense it's unrealistic it's a trash ass story