All Comments on 'My Sister My Love'

---you reached the concluding (At least I hope the story is concluded) paragraphs.

PS-I believe that it was in about 1866 the last time any consenting adults were arrested for incest.

I see potential, but being who I am I'd lay waste to the big brother and make sure he'd never think of opening his mouth. (Maybe arrange for him to be gang raped and be so embarassed (sp?) he'd never say a word about it or ? ) hehe Waiting to see what happens to him.

Your story sounds autobiographical. Did you risk a sensitive relationship, then ruin it by failing to be protective of someone who seemed on the verge of loving you, OR does it simply reflect the imagination of someone bitter with the knowledge that he has little spine?

Matt began to laugh as Vani's tears rolled down her face. My fists were clenched so hard that my fingernails drew blood from my palm. I just watched in rage as my older brother raped the face of the love of my life. He brutalized her, made her choke on his dick, and loved every minute of it. Finally after what seemed like an eternity, his cum boiled from within and Vani was choked by thick streams of his cum. She tried to spit it out but Matt grabbed her by the chin and held her mouth closed.

"Swallow it bitch." He said in a stern tone. The violation was complete.

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the guy --- brother --- is gay and he wants to suck another dick, it seems, but don't have the guts so he puts his sister in a rough position, so a guy could humiliate the little sister, so the gay brother could be a part of it, of course, assume he has more guts now that the sister is sucking and crying and likely enjoying it, too,,,

i was saving to read it but noted what the previous poster had said and took a scroll down and saw what happen; it's idiotic,,, so, thank you reviewer, for saving 5 minutes of my time so I could look for other more enjoyable and erotic stories,,,

This had a really bad ending, but it could be saved with another chapter where they get even with the older brother. What he did was rape and it was not cool! I won't suggest the method, but something along the lines of a blackmail back would work. Then maybe teh siblings could go to the same college and live together. IMHO, Willy

That was an awful ending to an otherwise good tale. I guess you had your reasons, but I failed to see why that last scene was necessary.

The ending was horrible and ruined a perfectly good story otherwise. What the older brother did was rape, pure and simple.

Very good story until the end. The sibs should have told their bro to shove it, unless he wanted to mess up the parents life as well as their own. Agree about the rape comment.

the writer is so fucking ugly he had to imagine a sex scene where he would be suck BUT ONLY IN IS HEAD stop writing STUPID ASSHOLE.

That was a great story ! Why did you have to FUCK it up by having the brother blackmail them ? You Surely Are A Fucking Piece Of SHIT !!!

ruined by the ending

You totally blew this story author. from a 5 star to a 1 star...

Wow, 1 story, starting from very nice, to completely bogus. And in 16 years never a chapter 2, to rectify it. 1 star. Which is even too much. Why does this shit story has a score or 3.7 ?