All Comments on 'My Sister, My Lover Ch. 02'

... so many people write a story and then Post it on Literotica without ever bothering to proof-read it?

Yes, this might have been a good story - without the mistakes that litter it!!

The minimal mistakes were unnoticed in such a great story. Keep up the good work!

A really hot story with good sex scenes.

A nice slow build up to what I hope is some very explicit fucking between him and his sister.

Thanks for the read

High morals indeed, if I were in your lead male role here, the sister would have been fuck twice already, hell at that age my dick got hard all I wanted to do was fuck. Turning down a piece never entered my thought process in my teen and early 20 years. Just saying, my own experience with incest makes me believe most not counting abuse happens in heat of the moment settings, such as arguing, comforting during a time of sorrow, catching each masturbating, or maybe just simple experimentation like kissing, to name a few. There was no remorse for me or for that matter my sister to this day about either our first time that happened some 30+ years ago or our continued sexual relationship we have maintained through the years.

I'm not the only one who is enjoying your stories.

Keep them coming PLEASE

Anonymous proof reader who is nit picking this story, get a life. There is a time to proof-read and there is a time to enjoy a good story. No one here, except you perhaps, worries about very minor errors. We are here for the story, well written, exciting, and certainly holding our attention until the next installment.

Where she found his "prostrate" was easy enough, since he was already lying down (and therefore prostrate). The gland in a man's colon, however, is PROSTATE, you moron!

Prostrate means laying down. It is not an organ. Your PROSTATE is the organ your lover fingers up your ass that feels soooo good. Spelling means everything.

Can’t wait for the next episode.

What a fantastic Sister.

Very nice story. Like it a lot. AAAA++++