All Comments on 'My Sister, My Lover, My Wife'

Wanted to give it 5*, but you rushed the back half of the story. So much more to go into that got glossed over... Solid plot though.

Short and sweet, love it! Though I honestly wish you would have spread this story out more, gone more into detail about how their feelings developed and how they ran away to their happy ever after

I loved the story, and encourage you to keep on writing, expanding and fleshing out your characters with just a little more work you would have rated five stars in my opinion. Four stars for the great start! Thanks!

Nice story. Love the idea behind it (the plot) but it was too rushed. I would have enjoyed it better if you added more to it. Sorry - only 3 ⭐️

Nice story but rushed. It could easily have been a longer story looking at the backstory of the siblings relationship. Lily had a boyfriend and got pregnant then had a miscarriage. How did Arin deal with that did he have non sibling feelings for Lily before this. Why is Lily scared of storms usually something has happened in the past to make someone frighten of storms. So many unexplored storylines that could have made this story longer.

Still I enjoyed reading it.

Nice and sweet and sentimental.

I LIKED IT...FIVE STARS!

For all those commenters that say this story was rushed, why did they read this? They all new it was one page. I, personally love short stories like this. 14k readers and counting. Yep, they're not complaining. I find that build up in a story is way too often boring as hell. I don't read stories that are longer than 3 pages. 2 is perfect. Keep up the great work, loved the ending. 5*

Very enjoyable. But what about mom? At what point did she know about her kids becoming a family? Or did I miss that?