All Comments on 'My Sister, My Lover - Week 01'

Liked it a lot so far, very realistic! I cannot wait for week 02 and I hope it will develop into a love story. Thank you, Cityzen!

Very good for your first submission. I liked the story line and the characters. I hope you will develop them more and let them explore each other. Thanks for your time and imagination.

If they continue she should have his baby

Great start to your story, hopefully you can elaborate on the characters. The sister sounds greatly troubled by the brother/sister that should be brought around slowly, I could see this being something that need 5 or more parts, but that is just my opinion. As far as the comment of her getting pregnant I don't know that needs to happen although the worry that she could become is somewhere you can take this if you wanted.

Looking forward to week 2.

Very good but being a yank I had to look up what a off-license was , but it had that so realistic fell of what siblings go through learning what life love and sex is all about *5* stars from me and look forward to more.

I think we've all been there extreme high after a first time swiftly followed by an extreme low, then guilt.

Good start. Looking forward to catching up with the following chapters. It's nice to read a story set in the UK for a change.