All Comments on 'My Sister, My Saviour'

Great story. Love it. AAAAAA++++++

Love the story but was surprised they didn't start referring to one another as husband and wife, rather than brother and sister.

A really enjoyable story, thank you.

Loved the story, nicely paced.

Well done.

Well written, made me fell like I was there with them, not in a creepy way mind you. Not sure why a lot of these stories have to drag out the time until the couple actually have sexual intercourse? Having been a horny 18 year old at one time, the goal was getting pussy and not wanting to wait months to get it. Again, well written and very hot story. Thanks

Really good love story. From adversity comes love, from adversity comes strength and purpose. That showed in this story! Well done.

Not your best work. Mom, Dad, Mom's new partner, friends- they're all non-entities. There's no struggle of any kind, no tension, no drama. We have no ideas what either of them did for work, school, or hobbies. Not once was I invested in this relationship. The sex was even bland. You've written better. 3*.

A story of true love beautifully told. What more is there to say? Perfect!

Nice story, but very repetitive and almost sickeningly sweet, with totally unnatural dialogue. Basically, they all lived happily ever after, as in all fairy tales.

Excellent story! 5/5

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Absolutely loved it. You get five stars. I really feel bad saying this but I did find a few mistakes. I should have written them down so I could have provided you with feedback. I think there were one or two on each of the first three pages. Great story.

I love a happy ending. Nicely done as always.

I really wanted to like this as the setup was really good but once he turned 18 everything happened way too quickly. I was hoping for a bit more of a build up than "your 18 now, I am suddenly really attracted to you".

Also is there any fetish (other than foot) creepier than panty sniffing?

You are a good writer but the lack of build up and instant acceptable of them being okay with having sex once he turned 18 felt rushed and I did not like the panty sniffing.

What Vanye said, except I could accept the somewhat bland nature of their relationship. The lack

of details about their other life didn’t bother me, but didn't they have names? Of course they did,

so constantly calling each other “big sister” or “big bro” instead of made up pet names or even their

given names might have spiced things up.

Nonetheless, a solid 5 ⭐️ rating.

loved it

Loved the story. Sibling sex is so special.

This is where the scoring system fails individuals even though it generally comes up with a fair number overall. I originally clicked on 4 stars then went back and gave it 5 as I'd given a 4 to a story far inferior to this. But this lacked something your best stories have and even they don't quite reach the heights of the best few authors on this site. Looking at other comments, there's no need for me to repeat what has already been identified. The basic idea is excellent, but I found myself skipping through the last two pages just to see where it ended up, and that shows that I had basically lost interest. All that apart, it's still the best new story published recently.

Love romantic incest stories, thanks for this. 5/5. One issue though, the mother...."by the time I'd hit ten, she was having an affair.". So that seems a very good explanation for the father's attitude towards her, at least. It also make her an unredeemable, unlikeable character. It took away a fair amount from this story, IMO, sorry.

it happened too fast, there was no build up or tension..

Excellent tale of love and romance between siblings and with lots of babies. Love this story so much. Thank you for sharing.

The comment, "it happened too fast" was hysterical. Another great story!

Why did they have to keep reminding each other that they are brother& sister. “ I want to eat my sisters pussy” I want my brothers big cock in my pussy “ we get it. They’re siblings. As some would say a decent wank story. They literally wore each other out.

Not sure I’d say it was a story, more like a narrative without direction.

very well written i enjoyed it thoroughly

Outstanding story. Thanks for writing it

A dream? What a dream.. if only my Sister could relaise what could be....

Alasn noo..o, or maybe??

Thank you US

I love it! I love happy endings.

Excellent story, I loved every bit of it.

A good story that could be a great story. I feel cheated sometimes when it escalates too fast, very little teasing moments to let the relationship blossom. I lost count of how many times she called him handsome, a greater range of descriptive words would greatly improve the story and one thing that always gets me is the use of the word arse over and over. Reminds me of a group of builders and not a brother talking about the sister he loves. Great but room for improvement xxx

Every one of this authors stories is a banger. I it when the woman a super soft dom. One thing I think though is that the father was sexually abusing his daughter and she just didn't tell her brother because she knew he would kill her father for it. That's just my personal thoughts but if the author reads this can you please confirm or deny it for me? Thanks.

Premise is good but the characters aren't fully developed. They read like scripted lines instead of genuine people. Overall the writing and the story line are good. Thanks for sharing this with us.

It’s a pity that in this work the sister is not a virgin. It ruins the romance.

MAY BE YOUR BEST STORY YET...CINCO ESTRELLAS!

One of the best I've read. My own writing has improved but does not equal this. Loved the story.

Enjoyed it again for the second time

Can't say I'm not a bit disappointed his sister wasn't a virgin; I guess I've been spoiled a bit by some of the more memorable stories I've read (I think many of them are by this author). Thought she would have saved herself for him. I kind of expected it given the background they shared. It was kind of implied she loved him all her life and I thought she would save herself for him since it did seem to be her plan all along to get him to come live with her. Oh well. Once it became clear she had previous lovers, I just kind of rushed through the story not really enjoying it as much as I was initially. I'm probably in the minority but I feel like stories like this lose something special when the sister doesn't save herself for her brother, particularly when it has a background like this one does. Too many implications that build hope, only to have it taken away. The story itself is great, but I do feel the romance and love aspect is a little tarnished. At least one other commenter feels that way. I mean she didn't even make any references to the boyfriends beyond vague "previous lovers" statements, which just makes it feel even less special. At least if it had been a loving relationship then it would be understandable to a certain degree, but instead, just a choice by the author to have her already have fucked other random guys. I honestly expected more from US, but I guess you can't please everyone all the time. I understand.

Anyway given all that, I felt like it was dragged out a bit unnecessarily. I'd understand her hesitancy more if she hadn't had sex with a guy before, but given everything else, it shouldn't be a big deal to just sleep with her brother when they're clearly in love with each other and doing everything else pretty much. Almost felt like salt in the wound. But maybe that's just me. I'm a bit of an old soul and my values are often not in alignment with most other people's these days.

The mother ended up impressing me with the way she handled learning her children were intimate. Very logical and considerate, dare I say enlightened, not at all ranting and raving like a lunatic, as seems to be the typical reaction from parents in these stories. If only others could learn from this.

The ending was nice. A happily ever after where they get to live and raise their family, able to express their love in public and have wonderful friends to share their life with. How very sweet.

Decent story. As others have pointed out, it seemed to move a tad quick as soon as he turned 18, but I can look past that. The main reason I can only give a 3 is that the brother/sister labels were used entirely too much in dialogue. The dialogue didn't read as natural a lot of the time due to this and came off as a bit ridiculous.

I would love see brother and sister watch as the kids follows there parents foot steps ones of girls would in love with brother?????????????

The story is good, but I gave it only 4.

It is a pity that the sister did not save her virginity for her brother. So I don't really understand the reason for waiting so long for the first sex. She's been teasing him for two years anyway. And those previous lovers? When she says that she loved her brother all her life and wanted to be with him. And she lived together for two years without anyone else, but she hadn't shown up or been heard from for three years before that. And then she appeared and said, "You will live with me because you are not happy here. I will raise you to be a husband and lover for me. The characters' behaviour is strange.

But the description of sex is quite funny and interesting. That's why I read the story. ;)

10 stars! Heart warming. Hot. Just a cool story. Bravo!

I know that the type of story here makes this complaint a bit awkward but this is just grooming right? Flip the genders and it becomes a little creepy.

I love the idea of this story but it goes from 0 to 100 too fast when the brother turns 18. The sister basically goes "lets have sex" and the brother instantly loves the idea. There is no build up beyond that, and no sense of "should we be doing this or not"

Sad that the sister didn't keep her virginity for the brother she loved so much, but a great story.