All Comments on 'My Sister, My Slut Ch. 01'

by Somerled

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YamiBoyYamiBoyover 9 years ago
^__^

It seems like a very promising story. I'm looking forward to read what happens next. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the good work. ^__^

mcbtwsmcbtwsover 9 years ago
Good Story

Look forward to Pt.2 . The name Somerled is related to Diarmid & Fingal also.

mcbtwsmcbtwsover 9 years ago
Another fact.

Ossian too.

brosismombrosismomover 9 years ago
great start

but a bit drawn out,next chapter ASAP Please

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
* *

Not even a hand-job? Just sort-of golden shower (with clothes on). I want the next 10 minutes of my life back.

arrowglassarrowglassover 9 years ago
This story has promise!

The build up is sure setting the stage...looking forward to where this looks lik it is going!

sabra16023sabra16023over 9 years ago
Part 2 ASAP

Waiting for Part 2. Thanks

KainnenKainnenover 9 years ago
good read

this was a well thought out story though my only complaint is there was no sex in it really. There were allusions to sex happening but nothing graphic, and even a short scene toward the end would have been good.

TigersmanTigersmanover 9 years ago
Very good

This story was very good. The character and plot development went way above the norm. I liked how you had Alex internalizing his feelings in regard what had transpired with the panties and Jen's condition. It showed the type of person he was. I can't wait to read the next installment.

BoiPussyBoiPussyover 9 years ago
I love this

Best Literotica work I've read in long time.

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