by Somerled
It seems like a very promising story. I'm looking forward to read what happens next. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the good work. ^__^
Look forward to Pt.2 . The name Somerled is related to Diarmid & Fingal also.
Not even a hand-job? Just sort-of golden shower (with clothes on). I want the next 10 minutes of my life back.
The build up is sure setting the stage...looking forward to where this looks lik it is going!
this was a well thought out story though my only complaint is there was no sex in it really. There were allusions to sex happening but nothing graphic, and even a short scene toward the end would have been good.
This story was very good. The character and plot development went way above the norm. I liked how you had Alex internalizing his feelings in regard what had transpired with the panties and Jen's condition. It showed the type of person he was. I can't wait to read the next installment.