All Comments on 'My Sister, the Bully'

This story is like Thai dipping sauce: hot and sweet! I love how Jenna is not breathtakingly beautiful but her brother becomes enamored nonetheless, envisioning her being pregnant. LOVE IT! 5 stars.

Great premise.

But rushed. Sex happens too automtically. No real seduction. No teasing. No extended foreplay. To much happens while one or the other is asleep.

Four stars.

Very good story, I like it very much! Perhaps you can write a part 2 before Jenna goes back to her college.

Loved this but it needs more parts I can easily see 2 to 3 more chapters.

This definitely deserves a second or maybe even multiple chapters as it would make an interesting story. So far it is a 5-star story.