All Comments on 'My Sister The Escort'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Had so much potential but was badly written and felt rushed. No attention for the other girls and lack of description. Disappointed

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

good story! needed just a little more action with the other girls.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This story is everywhere and nowhere at the same time. It's a definite pass from me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I liked this 😉

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
dumped at the drugs

idiot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I've read a lot of bad stories, but this is by far the worst. Not trying to offend, but maybe you just want to delete it and remove it from the site?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Needs a lot of editing assistance !

Phoenix_LusterPhoenix_Lusterabout 3 years ago

It's good if you want a quick wank but I can't really rate it well as a story.

TheSexualDevianceTheSexualDevianceabout 3 years ago

Even for a short story, this is absolute trash.

WargamerWargamerabout 3 years ago

Dumbass story, scores 1/5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Is it Nicki or Cynthia?

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