by ElusiveF4I
Had so much potential but was badly written and felt rushed. No attention for the other girls and lack of description. Disappointed
This story is everywhere and nowhere at the same time. It's a definite pass from me.
I've read a lot of bad stories, but this is by far the worst. Not trying to offend, but maybe you just want to delete it and remove it from the site?
It's good if you want a quick wank but I can't really rate it well as a story.