by TxRad
Please make a sequel where he redeems himself and gets in on the action!
Terrible ending and the family sucks for leaving him out of all the fun. What did he do? Being into incest an the like means not a single one of them can pull the morale high ground card on this kid. Bunch of hypocrite asshole. This needs a sequel to tie everything in, maybe he gets back at them all somehow? Just blackmails them and then makes their dirty little secret public knowledge. Honestly, this was good till the ending... that made me really think about it. This can be great if given the proper sequel. Not being harsh, just honest.
Love the story Could totally see a sequel taking place a year later when he joins the orgy can't wait for more
Hot HOT story!! Want more of same!
lol comments where just as enjoyable!
you have a great thread and avid readers, think about more from this plot line, please?
kay, id fucking call the cops on them if they pulled this shit. wouldve sent a copy to my email, show the cops, watch them get taken away and FUCKIN LAUGH. Story was alright, but that family sounds like theyre all fucking pricks.
this was ok but damn im glad im not in that family i would have left after being finding out that they cut me loose pretty much due to probation...thats fucked up
That has got to suck.... but at the same time the more I hear about why he isn't getting any the more it makes him sound like a bit of a bitch. So only A students can fuck the family, and anyone else gets ignored and punished.
Must continue what happens at the lake. Does he get with family or tease and torture him.
Please keep going with this story it could be very interesting.