by nylonpunkie
he should get a job in the same town she goes to college in, they could share an apartment, so he can "watch over" her.
I love the way you use their sense of smell, makes me think of my granddaughter ;)
We got to have more chapters. Please keep it going. This is one of the best stories on Literotica. Thank you in advance.
Very realistic and likable characters. The dialog was extremely funny and authentic. Easy to believe they were sibs and the development of their feelings and friendship was the best part. Oh and loved the sexual situations
I'm not sure where they could go now though, the series feels like it came to a natural end here. You will maybe like my latest story, called Yakov's Mom.
https://www.literotica.com/s/yakovs-mom
This is top quality erotica. Very well written. The characters come alive, with genuine emotions. This is creative writing at its best. It stands head and shoulders above the rest of the stories on this site which sadly are nowhere near this standard.
I loved every word. Thanks for writing this one. I will be sure to read the rest of your stories!
You wield language so... deliciously. This is a great story too. Makes me wish I was more into incest than I actually am. I'm a guy who grew up with brothers but no sisters. Maybe that's why? Anyway, you're a terrifically good writer - first rank as far as I'm concerned. Hope to hear much more from you.
Can you add a story with the mother after she figures out what is going on by the smell on his cheek?
This story about brother/sister intimate relationship has to be one of the best on Literotica. Amazingly well written with a realistic dialogue and above all ... SO EROTIC. It was a pleasure to read. I only hope that the author, Nylonpunkie (wherever you are), comes back to write more erotic stories.
IMHO, this is arguably the best writing on this site. I would bet good money that you write the "boring stuff" for a living. I would most certainly read any non-erotica that you write if I could get my hands on any.