All Comments on 'My Sister the Slave Girl: Ch. 01'

A very good beginning, I hope it continues with a bit more reluctance from Clara

On page 2 you called Eric "Dane." It was at the start of the wine.

Looking forward to the rest.

That is a hot read so far i like it very much. I like the financiel aspect of story and that Eric is not a total asshole at least so far. I like it that Clara is seduced not simply subdued.

Great please continue

I hope the brother takes control

Really good. Please continue.

I liked the story. I'm very much with 'third anonymous':

Please don't make Eric a total asshole/psycho - Please give him a real personality.

I like the finesse of the seduction... It would be a shame if Eric would debase himself having to use brute force.

What kinda cuck shit is this

Brother is a latent homosexual. He does not love his sister.

Wtff

Hot. Keep it going

You switched Eric's name to Dane on page 2

That was HOT as hell with characters who come across as very real. Seriously impressed!

So good