by chris99999
Parts of this were great. The scenes went a little too fast and clinical. That was fine for the "get it over" sex, but when they just enjoyed each other it would have been nice to have more description of emotions and sensations. Finally, we never get any concept of why he's even with Amy, as she seems like a total bitch to him.
Good story. I liked that he questioned the idea of it before agreeing to be the sperm donor, some of these stories jump right to it. But I think it takes more than promise of a blowjob from your girlfriend to convince you to impregnate your sister.
4-stars.
Hopefully his niece or nephew will want a sibling! Great story. Cheers. Frankie
Nice, I expected more details of the BJ, sister could have teased him before saying she was pregnant.
There’s so many things that are not described in this story. Is the brother and Amy married ?? Are Amy and Jess best friends before ??? An it has a vibe that Amy is cheating on him,, based on how you wrote the blowjob part,, she didn’t like it and never did it ,,, yet she did it amazingly well for him. It also read that Amy is a bitch in a way fighting with him for the different reasons ,, it also felt rushed for the sexual references
3⭐️ for me
Seems like there could have been a part 2 or maybe these nights out Amy was getting a little on the side. I almost expected her to come back with her panties full of another man’s juice. Or use the excuse that sense he gets to have sex with his sister, she could also have sex with someone as to make it even. She seemed to be a person like that.
Good story though
Well written but the affection was a long time coming. Also, the reluctant brother genre is really tiresome...
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The comment from 01Timbrr77 below here ss he sums up my feelings perfectly. I've seen much much better from this author.
Not a fan of how weak the man in, constantly letting himself be pushed around in an unreasonable situation. It was a huge turn off.
I enjoyed this story very much, and now I'm going to go read a few more of your works. Keep up the excellent work!
Not one of the greatest, and I sort of feel I've read a similar story on this site, years ago. But I've but got to give it 5, as it was enjoyable and it's better than a 4. One small inconsistency. Early on we were told that Jess had been trying to get pregnant with Cody for 4 years. Later we we told that Jess was only 20 and that was why her breasts were still firm. Technically not impossible if the married when she was just 16, but seriously unlikely.
Things that might have made it better still. More about Jess herself and some family background when they we growing up would have made it all more vivid. Apart from Amy and Cody there's no reason why they couldn't have continued having sex secretly while she was pregnant He was also a bit too much of a stereotype of an unrealistic ideal, a guy who is more interested in watching the recording of a fight than having sex with his sister!. It would have needed fine balancing to avoid spoiling the predictable development, but some dialogue demonstrating a greater show of empathy, care and kindness from him to Jess, even when it was mechanical would have brought them to life more.
Was this a resubmitted thing? 🤔 I could almost swear that I have read this story before. I hated the blackmail and coercion with his wife and sister ganging up on him to force his by withholding not only sex, but love and affection as well. 2/5
This guy is a fucking moron for putting up with the shit his wife or girlfriend gave him. Then to badger him into having sex with his own sister against his better judgement really pisses me off. 1 star. Sorry I have never givin 1 star before because I cant imagine any brother doing for real what this poor bastard was pretty much forced to do.
The constant manipulation of his wife pissed me off. I can understand turkey baster semen delivery, but I think I would have made them work a bit harder for anything else. But a a story within itself was well written. The ending was just like the sex OK I came I'm done.