All Comments on 'My Sister's a Ghost!'

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ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 1 year ago

Thanks for the shout out at the beginning of the story!

I thoroughly enjoyed this one, even though I wish that you would have continued with it at least until Astryd is born. Maybe you will continue some or all of the "My sister is a ..." stories somewhere down the road.

Definitely a 5/5 for this one. S.T.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Simply awesome!

IWishICouldWriteIWishICouldWriteover 1 year ago

An absolutely enjoyable way to start the day, Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think it might be easier to poison Desserts than to poison Deserts!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Dumb, real dumb.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

5-stars is nowhere near enough!

_Great_ story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Women live about 5% longer then men worldwide. Get your facts straight.

dwoelfledwoelfleover 1 year ago

Another good fun tale from you. Thank you.

winterplayingwinterplayingover 1 year ago

By page 2 I was truly confused. This was hard to follow, for me, so I gave up and just read the last paragraph. The writing isn't bad however it is choppy or stilted. And hard to follow.

HawtDadBodHawtDadBodover 1 year ago

I thought it was good I have read many novels and stories this one is cute make a second one please

msa6572msa6572over 1 year ago

I have literally read every story in this series. this one seemed, odd? not bad at all, just different.

Axel7Axel7over 1 year ago

Is this the multiverse of sibcest?

RodimusMikeRodimusMikeover 1 year ago
An observation or two.

We learn that Grace was a real prankster to her brother Elliot,and she died of cancer without telling her brother.And Grace was fated to enter Valhalla with Viking Gods like Thor,Freya,and even Odin.

But for me of knowing somewhat about Viking Lore I know Woden is Odin's Norse name but my question is this but when Elliot went to get Grace did the Gods grant her a second life to be with Elliot or was Grace still a ghost in the mortal world?,Also did she conceive and give birth to a baby named by Astryd?.

The story was all things to make it special, namely happy,sad,funny,heartbreaking,

angry,and so much more.But to describe this in one word would be "Unforgettable".

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved it! I wasn't sure at the beginning, but I'm glad I stayed with it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved it. I love the fantasy and supernatural aspects of the story. Would love to see a sequel either when he dies or with lily asking them for help.

KrazyKumbucketKrazyKumbucketover 1 year ago

DONT QUIT YOUR DAY JOB... I kept hoping that something interesting was going to happen.. what a fucking disappointment..

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is a very good well-witted story with the funniest Norse gods I've ever read! Thank yo, thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Best story on this site. Love mythology

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Enjoyed this one Shakna. Not understanding the hate.

Hope you find the god causing your headaches and kick them in the nether regions.

skippersdadskippersdadover 1 year ago

I liked it would like to see where it goes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Different but good. I enjoyed it very much. It's good to read a story that is so rooted in fantasy that it refreshes the mind that all the stories on here (even the allegedly true ones) are fantasy. It's also refreshing to not read yet another story about the mom or sister accidentally walking in on the father or son jacking off and just have to have his cock because it's so big. Blah blah blah.

Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What fun!

Although I can never remember if it is desert or dessert.

Seriously, though. Greet work.

CharletteCharletteover 1 year ago

It seems I agree with most of the other commenters.

This was a great story to get lost in.

So much was left unanswered, but that left so much to the reader to imagine for themselves.

Good writing !

Delray23Delray23over 1 year ago

Beautiful story loved the Norse aspect

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I couldn't fap, the story was too good. Dunno if that makes the story good or bad for this site.

MfkndragonMfkndragon12 months ago

This didn't make much sense they were from Australia yet it's a Norse religion fairytale that doesn't work the 2 don't mix and also if your living you're not getting into Valhalla not even in a fantasy that alone hurt the story so it only gets a 3 ⭐ rating learn the religion that you wanna write about first before you try another story like this 1

shaknashakna12 months agoAuthor

@Mfkndragon - Sigrún's living maid, goes to, and returns from Valhalla, in Helgakviða Hundingsbana II. The story was not unresearched.

whitebankaiuserwhitebankaiuser10 months ago

@Mfkndragon this is also a story that has a white witch that deals with mind boggling reality breaking things so things are allowed lol

MfkndragonMfkndragon9 months ago

@whitebankaiuser I see your point there lol and @shakna Im not sure I would fully go by helgakvioa hundingsbana ll but I do understand and see that you at least tried and I fully get that it's a fantasy story

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19814 months ago

Yeah I wouldn't go by helgakvioa hundingsbana ll either however it is a fantasy story so the mistakes that you made while writing this story can be overlooked such as mixing two religions together

shaknashakna4 months agoAuthor

"...the mistakes that you made while writing this story can be overlooked such as mixing two religions together"

Why would you call that a mistake? It was rather deliberate.

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