by shakna
Thanks for the shout out at the beginning of the story!
I thoroughly enjoyed this one, even though I wish that you would have continued with it at least until Astryd is born. Maybe you will continue some or all of the "My sister is a ..." stories somewhere down the road.
Definitely a 5/5 for this one. S.T.
By page 2 I was truly confused. This was hard to follow, for me, so I gave up and just read the last paragraph. The writing isn't bad however it is choppy or stilted. And hard to follow.
I thought it was good I have read many novels and stories this one is cute make a second one please
I have literally read every story in this series. this one seemed, odd? not bad at all, just different.
We learn that Grace was a real prankster to her brother Elliot,and she died of cancer without telling her brother.And Grace was fated to enter Valhalla with Viking Gods like Thor,Freya,and even Odin.
But for me of knowing somewhat about Viking Lore I know Woden is Odin's Norse name but my question is this but when Elliot went to get Grace did the Gods grant her a second life to be with Elliot or was Grace still a ghost in the mortal world?,Also did she conceive and give birth to a baby named by Astryd?.
The story was all things to make it special, namely happy,sad,funny,heartbreaking,
angry,and so much more.But to describe this in one word would be "Unforgettable".
Loved it. I love the fantasy and supernatural aspects of the story. Would love to see a sequel either when he dies or with lily asking them for help.
DONT QUIT YOUR DAY JOB... I kept hoping that something interesting was going to happen.. what a fucking disappointment..
This is a very good well-witted story with the funniest Norse gods I've ever read! Thank yo, thank you!
Enjoyed this one Shakna. Not understanding the hate.
Hope you find the god causing your headaches and kick them in the nether regions.
Different but good. I enjoyed it very much. It's good to read a story that is so rooted in fantasy that it refreshes the mind that all the stories on here (even the allegedly true ones) are fantasy. It's also refreshing to not read yet another story about the mom or sister accidentally walking in on the father or son jacking off and just have to have his cock because it's so big. Blah blah blah.
Well done!
What fun!
Although I can never remember if it is desert or dessert.
Seriously, though. Greet work.
It seems I agree with most of the other commenters.
This was a great story to get lost in.
So much was left unanswered, but that left so much to the reader to imagine for themselves.
Good writing !
I couldn't fap, the story was too good. Dunno if that makes the story good or bad for this site.
This didn't make much sense they were from Australia yet it's a Norse religion fairytale that doesn't work the 2 don't mix and also if your living you're not getting into Valhalla not even in a fantasy that alone hurt the story so it only gets a 3 ⭐ rating learn the religion that you wanna write about first before you try another story like this 1
@Mfkndragon - Sigrún's living maid, goes to, and returns from Valhalla, in Helgakviða Hundingsbana II. The story was not unresearched.
@Mfkndragon this is also a story that has a white witch that deals with mind boggling reality breaking things so things are allowed lol
@whitebankaiuser I see your point there lol and @shakna Im not sure I would fully go by helgakvioa hundingsbana ll but I do understand and see that you at least tried and I fully get that it's a fantasy story
Yeah I wouldn't go by helgakvioa hundingsbana ll either however it is a fantasy story so the mistakes that you made while writing this story can be overlooked such as mixing two religions together
"...the mistakes that you made while writing this story can be overlooked such as mixing two religions together"
Why would you call that a mistake? It was rather deliberate.