All Comments on 'My Sisters, Mom, and Me Ch. 04'

Hopefully you keep this series going I'm really enjoying it.

Not bad but it was almost all sex with no relationship development that mattered. 4*

I really enjoyed this serial story! I, too, am hopeful you do not decide to end it here. Further development of the unconventional 'marriage' and family relationship over time would be really outstanding.

Keep going. They all move to some place else get married and all 3 women have his child

Please don't let this die out like so many others . Awaiting what is around the corner .

Please continue this

Why the hell would a straight man want to shove his cock up a shit shute?

Can we please get a part 5

Also loving the solstice story

more please we want to read chapter 5 asap and 6 and 7

agree with one other here...doing anal is not for me...this story was perfect as far as mom sisters and brother....i so badly wanted that but not sure how it would be received....i think my mom would have been on board...seen her naked many times ( beautiful full bush)...plus i think she played both sides a few times...again wonderful story

It’s like drinking Vodka Martinis all your drinking life then the bartender making it with gin. They don’t taste the same, obviously but, it’s pretty good with Gin. Same with ploughing the back 40. The sensation is indescribable cause you can’t put a finger (pun intended) on the sensation. My first time was with an experienced chick and she was a screamer who loved it.

Doc, it just keeps getting better!!

Good series, Hope it continues!

Please continue this one I could read 10 more chapters

I really like these 4 stories. I like the sex , and tone of the stories, more romantic. Please continue eith this series.

where's rest?

am hoping this is not the end of the story. will have to check when it was last added too. will be waiting for more.

Wonderful absolutely wonderful, so much lovely sucking and fucking. Cunt lapping sex manic Lanc’s U.K.

I have waited a couple months now keep looking for more have you decided to end the story here or is your creative brain thinking of more ?

Are you ok? Hope nothing has happened. If everything is good it would be nice to see how this turns out. I know it sounds like an ass request but really enjoy this story. Hope they work out how to be together always.

I will get back to it but I’m not sure when. Sorry to leave you all hanging.

DocWords

I really hope that you find a way to continue the series. I’m really curious about Mrs. C and her sister, as well.....

more of this story please

No, no, no... I won't be reading any more chapters. Too much girl on girl for me. Too many toys. 2*

If possible do continue with this story. Really good work!

Very hot n sexy story and so much more to happen yet. I hope they are staying together as the ladies wanted and after genetic testing start making babies. Please keep going.

Brilliant story but I was a bit disappointed in the ending! The story overall is still worth a 5

Story = great! Ending = so-so.

I don't get it.

The whole idea was that it was my brother's cock that tore their hymen. Then Mom does it with her fingers and the first thing they shove in the middle of themselves is a plastic vibrator, having a big live cock. That's cheating.

There should be a part 5 where Mike does the sisters and mom pregnant.

Next chapter please!!

Great, right up to the attorney. Now please apply your creative genius to the rest of the story. The faux weddings, beating the birth odds, second generation incest, garnering the wealth to support the expanding family, recruiting other women of the family, larger and more private play ground. Please , more story, i am vested. Thank you

All parts I rated 5 stars. For the entire series, 5 stars +++++. You have a wicked, weird mind, and I love it.

Absolutely fabulous, what would I not give to be getting it on with these three red hot sex crazy cunts permanently drunk on cut juice and in orgasmic bliss. Playing with all three cunts at the same time, eating one, fucking one and fingering one, sex heaven. Cunt crazed fucker.

What happened next?

No clue. The story ended.

I’m sorely disappointed that this ended where it did. Perhaps a little less graphic sex and more time dedicated to the storyline.

ABSOLUTELY LUV IT!!!! WHAT WOULD TAKE IT OVER THE TOP IS RANDOM PHOTOS THROWN IN!!!!!!!!!!

The rest of the story please!!!

A good second reading. The characters could have been rounded out they are all very two dimensional and only appear to work on a sexual basis. Basically this whole story has taken place in the holiday cabin, how did the relationships pan out with college and work life.

An interesting read that has been proofread and edited well. Thank you for publishing your work.

Great story.

Second time reading and wish there was more to it. Is like a good start but not finished hope you add more at some point.

If the story ended why include the bit about the father at the end. His involvement was done and certainly didn't need an encore. It felt a bit off.

THAT'S HOW YOU WRITE A STORY. Loved it once , loved it twice, loved it thrice. Another mom son twins story please. An avid fan of Literotica. Well done.

Great series!! 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐!! Read the whole series be fore I wrote this and loved it all. Great start, excellent character build up, loved the emotional and ethical turmoil and resolution. Also liked how you added the confirmation of dad leaving with no possible return. Everything was covered. Would love another chapter but not sure how you could add to the excellence.

I want more of this awesome foursome! Certainly there's a few more chapters in store for us.....?? Id like to see the divorce settled and Dad still trying to backtrack until the very moment its finalized. The a bit of karma served when he finally finds that Mike has replaced him. Would love to see their ceremony then honeymoon also. Maybe ending with a "new town/new life secnario.

Even if we dont get anymore.... still 5 star in my opinion.

This was a great story. This writing was the most grammatically correct of all I have read so far, thank you. Keep writing, please

This really needs a conclusion.

Great story. Stayed pretty much horny the whole 4 chapters.

Please continue

I think they need too move out west. Get some land, and enjoy each other.

All 3 women get pregnant

Have to agree with many other commenters; this BEGS for more chapters. What happens when the kids go back to school? Do the girls continue to date others or just stay with Mike? One possible scenario with Dad could be he shows up drunk and they tie him up and give him a demonstration to show what he gave up by walking out. (and all three of the women could peg him . . .) When do the girls get to meet experience Mrs. C and her sister? The sisters need to get made airtight. Longer term, mom could get pregnant with another boy for some real long term relief for Mike. Lots of possibilities . . .

Thanks for an fun, interesting story. Kind of felt bad that Dad had to be an a-hole but guess the story demanded a way forward. Mom attitude kind of interesting in that she did not mind sharing dad with other women, just resented it when he went off with other women alone; doe this mean she wouldn't want Mike to go with either sister alone?

Also, very nice job of editing. Very enjoyable to read a story without spelling errors or names changing throughout the story.