All Comments on 'My Sister's Story Ch. 01'

The lack of punctuation detracts from the story.

Very touching. It leaves me wondering if this is true.

This is was a very sweet story. Thank you, I enjoyed it very much.

This story was great, I loved it. best in a long time

absolutely wonderfully told, such a great love story.................ty

I loved it and hope you do more like it.

Incest and family loyalty. Wonderfully told,minimum typos, most were during the sex scenes which interrupted the flow. Relax.

Relationships like this can be very beneficial. Mature relatives can help each other in many ways.

It could use a bit of editing though.

Tom kept popping up when it should have been John.

Overall the story is very believable and the sex scenes were very erotic.

Thanks for the good read.

Good story

Adding some sort of quotation marks around people's dialogues would be nice.

And adding some sort of divider when the scene/setting changes would be nice.

Ex:

Paragraph ending scene 1

* Transition *

Paragraph starting scene 2

Great read, all the best and good luck!

could have been so much better IF you had used a good editor before posting.

With or without editing, this is one of the most beautiful and touching stories I have read. FIVE STARS!

This story tells of the love between siblings and to me, love is not just romance but sharing and giving feelings one unto the other. Being a paternal twin I speak of such in complete knowledge. My sister and I went separately with each of us having our own spouses. However, things turned out where we needed each other, though not sexually. The author brought out the many things that make people truly great and loving - finding fault with this story or its intent isn't necessary or needed to be spoken or written about. Enjoy this story as I did, love is shared by many, yet by only a few. This was definitely a 5 Star story.

Just one story for more than 7 years now.

A story full of love...

Somebody wrote: "Touching. Very touching. It leaves me wondering if this is true".

I feel exactly the same! If this is a real life story I'm very happy for yourselves, I hope you enjoy many years of health and hapiness.

Please write more about these real or imaginary lovers. I feel myself very ralaxed reading about them.

Don't worry about editting comments. The important thing is what they feel and you describe it perfectly.

no need for that chapter 1, this a beautiful and finished story... thank you, I loved reading it...