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All Comments on 'My Soldier Comes Home'

by tall_texan54

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
dry...

The plot was ok, but the story was flat. Dialogue would have helped. It would have been better if the author showed the thoughts and feelings of either character.

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