by qualitywheat
I thoroughly love this story. I was young once, and I remember being seduced at 15, by our neighbor, who was 41 at the time. I'm now 72 and can say it was the best sex I ever had. I give this 5 stars!
"(G)o where I want, do what I want...." Most certainly.
Sloppy writing -- misplaced punctuation. You ask questions when there are none, and when there's a question, you don't ask it.
Take time to proofread
Yeah, now she's had a taste of hot forbidden sex, she'll want more. Five Stars!
I like the lady next door and son's best friend. Not a realistic start from my perspective but a great story. Maybe she does her son next.
:-)
A few mistakes, but who said you were perfect.?
Part two easy stretch....Toby has a friend, and his friend is in the know.
Get her nipples going...she'll be compliant.
Wow Hot as Hell! Is it true that a women's pinched nipple goes directly to her pussy and she starts getting wet, sure seems so. Hope there's another chapter at least. Maybe her son catches Toby fucking his mom and joins in. A real hot nice threesome follows. Five stars!