by Cheleste
I love the descriptions, love them. You can really feel the energy between the characters. I do wish it was longer, not because it was too short, but because I loved reading it so much.
I'll definately be adding this as a favorite and looking at your other stories if you have any.
Excellent beginning to a cougar story. I enjoyed it, even though it lacked some dialogue.
I am especially fond of this line: "I rode him then, up and down, up and down, like a pony on a carousel. The music whined, the world spun, and all was cotton candy and glossy red apples forever."
Quite descriptive and perfect. You're a gifted writer.
Hey, you are just starting on this erotic tale. Whatta ya mean?
One of my greatest fantasies as a young man. I wish it had happened to me.
descriptive and to the point... but covering everything... the wants the needs, the desires
well done
I enjoyed this! Nicely written, vivid and exciting! Great job!