by nickisilvers
Omg so fuking erotic n sexy I was rock hard all way through can’t wait for more parts
Great start! Hopefully the next chapter will be longer. Five stars and a favorite point!
Good start! Hope by the end that she ends up pregnant by the thick loads she will soon be receiving !
you couldn't write incest family naked mom and son and daughter and that's it! father is not needed
As a Mum I found myself in the same situation, only difference was I gave in to the temptation. To have my own son doing unspeakable things to me is out of this world, like in the story he is huge.
I was always attracted to my mom, she had the nicest tits!! Every night after her bath she would walk past me with kinda see thro nightgown, I could see her breast and nipples. Would have love to experience anything with her!!!!
So erotic and well written. Very realistic in having the Eureka Moment when unexpectedly seeing that once in a lifetime erection.
great start! And now i'm just gonna crib from one of the comments above as it's soooo funny: "i take it the husband is butt fucking the daughter". His cock has already inveigled itself into mommy's brain; surely the romp is ON!!!
To be honest it's great but pacing is like way, way too fast.. There is no build up and It ruins the atmosphere of the story..
Covers all the structural aspects of writing quite well. An enticing setup for a mother/son relationship (with hints that it might also include a son/daughter/mother relationship in later chapters.
Keep writing.
MLJ
We want to read about the son filling mom with those thick loads from his horse cock. She is still of age to sprout his baby bump. Go!
is this a side story to 'BECOMING MY LITTLE BROTHER'S TOY' tristan and erin are the same name as that story
Give sexy son Tristan the beginnings of chest hair across his upper chest -- a sexy sight on a young man!
Nicely presented with tension mounting consistently as Mom tells us what is happenig. Your descriptions are extremely vivid, as are the experiential thoughts running through her/you mind.
Can't wait for chapter two, is mum going to be able to get Tristan's monster deep inside her sopping wet pussy folds???
Nice start, maybe mom can hear Tristan moaning her name when he is jerking his cock, mom will get her sons cock in her mouth and pussy, they will make love when the house is empty and fuck quicly when dad and sis are at home, i hope that mom will get pregnant to her son, they are totally in love with each other, please part 2 soon.
She denied father some fun at the kitchen sink, but can she resist her son's python doing the same while he's downstairs? He needs to tame her flames
Good story. Hope to see a chapter 2 soon. Maybe Erin sees her bother's huge dick and wants it as well and mom and daughter come up with a plan to get the huge dick. And son gets both his mom and sister pregnant and kicks dad out of the house and becomes man of the house
Absolutely sucking fucking hot. I absolutely adore Cunt in every way possible, love eating my mother while fucking my sister then swapping. The more I get the more I want. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.
That was great! Very well written. Interested in seeing where you take this....Can't wait for more....don't wait too long!!
Great start to your story, if I may say.
Take it slowly, mum thinks she got away with it. But did she, is the son thinking of ways to fuck her ,as he plays with himself. Ect Ect.
Thanks for sharing.
A great aside from the main story of Erin and Tristan to slowly bring mom in.
Here's a suggestion: Before you bring in mom, lets push Erin further in her addiction. Have Tristan go on a date with another girl his age, and Erin develops a jealous rage. When she gets back, she's needy and forces herself on Tristan, only to get more enaged as she tastes his date's cunt on his cock. Furious he "cheated" on her, she leaves.
But her addiction pulls her back, and the humiliation of cleaning another girls cum off her brothers cock drives her back to him. She begs Tristan to tell her about his date while she sucks his cock.
Then, after Erin and Tristan know just how deeply addicted Erin is, mom secretly catches them together, and brings herself off watching them, hearing Tristan humilate Erin as his cock hungry slave-slut. And she wants to be in Erin's place.
Then she blackmails Tristan, threatening to tell their father, into taking her on as his cock addicted slave slut too. Eventually, forcing him to bring her ans Erin together where jealousy forces Erin to compete with her mom as who can be the more deprived slut for Tristan.
Very hot .. I am already wet and very aroused like his mom .. picturing his long hard cock 😝 😁 more 😘
Wowwww… I enjoyed your slow pacing, your storytelling, your choice of words. Very well written. Please go on. Thanks for this story.
Unlikable character right from the start. The mom is a straight..uo..bitch. 1.) For raising a little Twink of a son, and 2.) For exploiting his Twinkiness and addressing him with a feminine version of his name. Instead has simple sex with he4, he should have cold cocked her, fillednher ass with jizz, then cleaned his little penis off in her unconscious mouth. She would have awoken with a sore ass, and smelling breath, with no clue how either occurred.
My stepmom had an insatiable urge for sex with me for the very same reason as Tristian's mom; my huge, thick girthy circumcised penis with huge head on it. She was phenomenal at foreplay and pleasuring my big throbbing cock. She was an outstanding fuck and could scream like a banchee when she'd climax all over my big hard dick! She loved slurping the big head on my cock!
Hot mom my mom is a freak to sometimes I was fucking my girlfriend one time a we caught her spying my girl asked her if she wanted to join us my girl got her hand and told her come on I helped persuade mom to join us I got her hand and put it to my dick then I put my dick in her mouth and she started sucking my girl eat her out then I bent mom over and fucked her
sounds so hot ! My mom used to watch me from time to time when I around 12-14. I would jerk off 3=4 times a day, sometimes more.This was in the 1950's. Nothing ever happened between us, but I could see her watching & she never had a clue I could see her.