by spaldan
When I posted my first and only story, someone complained that one particular part seemed completely unrealistic. It was, in fact, the only part that was pretty much true.
Impatiently waiting for chapter 2. One of the best stories I've read on here yet
Well written with great background. A second chapter would be great.
Wonderful storytelling. SWEET characters.
You captured their honesty and innocence perfectly!
This is a well-written story with a careful introduction, excellent character development, tender romance, and an engaging plot. Although classified as First Time, it is much Romance as anything else, and, as such, it is exceptionally fine. Five Stars.
This is a really great story. It's very realistic and brings back fond memories of my early experiences with my first girlfriends. Thank you for sharing this with us.