All Comments on 'My Step Mom's Punishment'

More rape fantasy ok.

Awsome story, loved it. Can't wait to read your other stuff. We'll done

This went from sadism to regular bdsm real quick. Kinda upset the thing it had going on imo.

I working on the first draw final version you should contact me.

Working on the firs drawing final version of the story

Hi its me again. This is a fantastic story, written to it proper conclusion. Again I hope you will revisit you other works especially captured escort, and finish them properly.

Different than the usual. Loved it.

Two points of view were bad enough but three was too much.

The story repeated itself far too much too.

If you'd stuck to first person past tense it might have been readable.

Wow, I loved this story. I remember when I was much younger I would sneak into my dad and step mom's bedroom and do just what Kyle did, tried on her lingerie. I would have loved for her to have caught me and done the same thing to me as she did with Kyle. I had fantasized about fucking her for many years.

This story began with so much promise, but quickly got boring. The multiple POVs created repitition, confusion, and eventual boredom.