All Comments on 'My Step Sister and I Ch. 02'

Dropped a bit, maybe the story will improve as it goes along. AA++

I wonder if, in fact, Jenny1212 is female? If so, I want to be her step brother!

Great story, good timing, displays tremendous desire on both characters. Made me relate oh so strongly with the point of view.

A Slut Story

* in the naughty words?

This one was better; thought for a minute you’d dropped the inexplicable asterisks for good, but then you picked them back up a paragraph later. Just a friendly suggestion, find an editor to work with you. Your story is intriguing and I’m interested in seeing where it goes next, and getting punctuation/spelling/etc. right makes it easier to read, and keeps things flowing. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Good story, where is the next chapter. It has been 2 months Jenny1212, please do not leave this story in the unfinished category. To this point is 5 star story

At the beginning we see Vicky playing like a flirtacious teenager trying to seduce her Stepbrother,and showing him the heart tattoo above her pussy.But then Vicky goes and ruins it by saying she had sex with the artist just on a wimb,thereby turning herself into a common slut to fuck any guy without reason.

And Vicky is stunned when her Stepbrother rejects her advances because of her attitude towards casual sex and risks of STD's and possible pregnancy.No Vicky is portrayed as an easy girl who don't give a shit about anyone except herself,and Stepbrother is completely justified in shutting Vicky down. She comes off as a desperate immature skank who has no concept of love,only casual sex with random guys.Total Waste of a Post.

I see that it has been some time since the second part was posted. I hope you're planning on adding more to it someday. I had 2 step-sisters which I guess is why this caught my attention. In my case I was the youngest and nothing like this situation arose. Had this happened to me it likely would have caused an "international-grade crisis." I'd be too easily led astray.