All Comments on 'My Stepmother Daisy'

Same old same old.

I couldn't get passed the 4th "err....." Please find another way to express hesitation on your main character's part.

I LIKE IT VERY MUCH...CINCO ESTRELLAS!

Nice story. I found it very heart warming that these two could cum, wink, wink, together.

Very horny now

This story had a good premise, but nothing new with the scenario that I haven't read before countless times. I felt like I kept reading the same paragraphs over and over again. I gave up about two-thirds of the way down page one. And, yes, the "er"s got annoying for me as well. No rating from me.

I don’t believe for a minute that a young college student stud would have the staying power, in,out,in ,out, to make her climax 3 times.

Not believable, B.S.

Wonder what color of hair she had??

Great characters, great story, wonderfully romantic, all from an outstanding author.

Great story.

Badly written, too cold (nonsexual).

Ok, I read another of your stories and it's the same theme. The sexual contact is rushed and it lacks eroticism. I gave up early so I'll reserve using stars to downgrade it but I'm moving on. Your writing style just doesn't do anything for me.