All Comments on 'My Stepson'

Loved it. The pace, the anticipation. Just perfect.

By far the best seduction story I have read on Literotica.

Wonderful story. Please continue!

I've been reading incest since 1974 and this is the best. Great introduction, seduction, sex and hint of the future. A beautiful woman can only be ignored by her husband before she seeks a safe release.

Absolutely fucking fantastic! So hot!! I'm hoping that there will be a followup chapter detailing what happened once they got home. Five stars and a favorite point!

Looking forward to hearing more about them. Very sensual.

Wonderful. want more

She called him son (no mom does that), baby, honey, but never his name which 99.9% of people do. Seems small detail but it makes a story feel awkward when you use terms not expected. Might as well have called him my husband's son.

Cool. Enjoyed reading .keep up the good work.TY

with this part only taking 3 pages there should have been more details of the final two weeks. There were plenty places for mom to get her needs met, kitchen counter, over the sofa arm. on a blanket by the ocean. Story ended too quickly. Otherwise liked the story very much.

When it's dinner time, does mom yell out the window son, son, dinner time? What if she has more than one son? Lost in a grocery store....son, daughter, where are you? Can you please page son and daughter for me? Lol "Oh mom your pussy feels so fucking good!" "Oh Jim, that's it, fuck me, fuck me baby." "Oh Jim, oh honey, I'm cumming, fuck me Jim, oh Jim, oh yes, oh yes, AAAAAAHHHHH!!!"

Quality read but this could have gone next level if there was a reveal that Ryan's ex was cheating with his dad/ neglectful husband. Easy to 'nip' pick from sidelines though, I do appreciate this author's multiple clear cut strengths as an erotic author and hope the muse inspires her again soon.

I thank MaryAnderson for sharing.

You nailed it! Great lead up, well paced seduction and awesome climax. Please continue with another chapter, I loved the anal play too, maybe they could end up becoming a little dangerous. If the husband comes home exhausted and wont play then she goes to the lounge room to find is son who will....

I always enjoy your stories, thanks for writing this one. Very good, as always!

This is the time I've read any of your stories.

I need a cigarette now. Wow!

Keep writing.

Seems like turn and cough would have made more sense.

Cape Cod is the mainland.

Great well-written and extremely erotic story.

Beautifully descriptive and sensual.

Loved it

She has her own fuck toy, How good. 5 *****

Thought I hadn't seen any new stories of yours. I do like this one. It's also good when someone takes time with punctuation and grammar. Thanks.

Why do I think Beverley and Lauren have been introduced so that they can all get to know each other better?

Quit reading when the domme made him douche.

There is not a word homophobia. The correct word is homonausea. The very idea is enough to make men sick to their stomach.

(8/31/2021) Well, I liked the playing doctor bit. But I would think that an exam room would be quite unfordable for our sexy doctor. I guess passion wins out. Also, the anal bits didn't really work for me; but, that me. Still, it was a nice read. This story is sequel-worthy, IMO. How about part 2. It would be great to read how they work around hubby, and what they will do when Ryan has to go off to Columbia?

I Loved It! Well written. You could leave it right there, but!!! If after a year to not , you could give us 3 or 4 move chapters. Like, he pounds her for two weeks 4 or 8 times a day and goes home PG. She makes hubby fuck her once, so he'll think it's his, goes back to servicing her stepson 3 or 4 times a day. All three holes, and loads of cum. Did I mention she has a younger sister. Another cumslut! You take it from there. We're waiting. Watch your editing. Keep writing.

XYZ

Why do people read incest if they don't like nasty. Grow up. Bring the other doctor into the story. Nice three way.

Great story. Thanks for writing it.

please continue with this awesome story :-)

This is a great story, the dialogues are really cool! There is a lot of potential here for the rest of the plot ... they fuck on the father's bed, the mother sneaks into the son's room at night and more ... Please, continue this story, you write beautifully.

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOOOOO HOTTTTTTTTT!!! PERFECT STORY JUST AS IT IS!! WOW.

Damn, this is a wonderful story. I truly wish there was more. 5 stars

Damn, you write a beautiful story. So fucking hot.

I really loved the anal play... too bad you didn't continue on that and getting him hooked on it...